Most people nowadays hold a similar view that scientific research work should be
conducted under the supervision of government agencies instead of private
companies. I totally agree with this viewpoint and my reason will be explained in
the following paragraphs.
First of all, today there are private companies that only aim to achieve high profits
or only know how to compete with other companies by stealing data without any
regard for quality and safety. This can cause a lot of controversy in society. For
example, in drug research, if scientists cannot ensure the safety and goodness of
medicines, the epidemic will not be repelled, many people may be in more danger
and certainly the company and those scientists will be deactivated. Therefore,
allowing the government to intervene in the management of scientific research
will achieve high efficiency, create trust with consumers and even important data
in the research process will be highly confidential.
Besides that, research work of scientists needs support and investment on a large
scale, so if it is managed by state agencies, the most modern equipment will be
provided during the research process. In addition, under the strict control of the
state, each person with different qualifications will be involved in different
projects. This will open up more opportunities for scientists that can help their
careers grow.
In conclusion, I feel that it is right to let the government control scientific research
rather than private companies, which not only benefits the community but also
helps many other companies.
- The given line graph illustrates clients average every year spending on mobile phone national and international land line and services 73
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- Many people believe that scientific research should be carried out and controlled by governments rather than private companies To what extent do you agree or disagree 61
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: And
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, may, so, therefore, i feel, in addition, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1372.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46613545817 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86326432013 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.601593625498 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.3097871469 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.2 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.9 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 21.0 4.38176352705 479% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255869681611 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0963007618297 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0748121440412 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0750473347111 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0598656395625 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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