Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In contemporary settings, there exist divergent opinions regarding people's lifestyles. Whilst some argue that citizens had better keep the same habit from day to day and be resistant to change, others opine that change plays a pivotal part in their daily lives. This essay will analyze both viewpoints while clarifying my support for the latter.
On the one hand, adherents of avoiding changes suppose that this way of living provides them with a sense of stability. Evidently, should people get accustomed to their everyday activities. they will soon become more skillful at doing them and are able to turn them into their own strengths. For instance, employees who work for their organizations for a long time will get used to the workload and deeply understand the way they operate, thereby being more productive, which may in turn possibly acquire more promotion opportunities. In other words, refusing to change can keep people within their comfort zone and guarantee them a more straightforward life.
I assert, on the other hand, that willingness to change is of paramount importance for individuals to better comprehend themselves. To illustrate, students who do not have specific career prospects should endeavor various hobbies, one of which once suits them will become their passion and let them know their dream profession. The implication of this is that those who dare to change not only have a chance to assess their capacity in different aspects but also gain a massive amount of knowledge in the process, which will indubitably be advantageous in many afterward circumstances. Furthermore, only risk-takers are brave enough to change, so even when they fail in any realm, they at least have tried and can escape regretful feelings in the future.
In summary, even though avoiding change truly helps people to lead a stable life, I strongly believe that being receptive to change has more significant meaning because it gives them more valuable chances to discover themselves. However, whether people ought to change or not is dependent on their own conditions, so they should consider meticulously before choosing one of the two ways.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 191, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...ccustomed to their everyday activities. they will soon become more skillful at doing...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, regarding, so, while, at least, for instance, in summary, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1814.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22766570605 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79875610522 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608069164265 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 558.0 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.8238897048 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.571428571 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7857142857 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207819126758 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0760008975818 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0416695448054 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133993150681 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0321268885226 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 191, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...ccustomed to their everyday activities. they will soon become more skillful at doing...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, regarding, so, while, at least, for instance, in summary, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1814.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22766570605 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79875610522 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608069164265 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 558.0 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.8238897048 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.571428571 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7857142857 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207819126758 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0760008975818 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0416695448054 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133993150681 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0321268885226 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.