People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the pos

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People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.

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Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.

The statement states that people who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers. Yes, taking important decisions based on emotions can sometimes be very dangerous. Good decision makers don't allow their emotions to have impact on their decisions.

Taking decisions based on emotion state can be very risky.  Imagine a situation of accident chaos, unpredicted natural disasters, or a more general situations like choosing a college/career in last moment of the process, or tempted to give a try to new bad habit. In these situations, we don't have enough time to take a decision, we doesn't have control over our decision making and hence we barely rely on our emotions and just listen to what our heart says. These decisions mostly turn out to be a bad decisions.

Hence to overcome these type of situations, one should focus on improving their mental health. Mental health plays a vital role in impacting one's decision making potential. Hence, improving mental health by practicing mediation, yoga can miraculously improve one's ability to take decision in crucial times.

Finally, I agree with the statement given that taking decision solely based on emotions can have adverse effects and hence making one a poor decision maker. One should focus on their mental health to overcome this problem.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, hence, if, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 19.6327345309 20% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.9520958084 46% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 11.1786427146 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 13.6137724551 22% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 28.8173652695 62% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 55.5748502994 54% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 16.3942115768 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1151.0 2260.96107784 51% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 220.0 441.139720559 50% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23181818182 5.12650576532 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 4.56307096286 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65782409606 2.78398813304 95% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 204.123752495 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568181818182 0.468620217663 121% => OK
syllable_count: 370.8 705.55239521 53% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59920159681 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.96107784431 81% => OK
Article: 1.0 8.76447105788 11% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.70958083832 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.67365269461 119% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 19.7664670659 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 22.8473053892 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.9535950037 57.8364921388 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.636363636 119.503703932 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 23.324526521 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 5.70786347227 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.25449101796 114% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.20758483034 61% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 6.88822355289 73% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.67664670659 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299356176201 0.218282227539 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1378658902 0.0743258471296 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.155233752581 0.0701772020484 221% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215477320511 0.128457276422 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.140501860321 0.0628817314937 223% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 14.3799401198 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 48.3550499002 88% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.197005988 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.5979740519 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.32208582834 102% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 98.500998004 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 12.3882235529 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.1389221557 90% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.9071856287 109% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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