Some people think that liking your job is more important than how much money you earn while others think that your salary is more important than how much you like your job. Compare the two views and give your opinion
It is true that some individuals believe that how much money you earn is less important than whether you enjoy your job, although other people think money is more important. I would argue that enjoying a career is the most essential. In this essay, I will discuss both views and explain why I support them.
On the one hand, the role of salary in the quality of life is crucial. Everyone always has an amount to pay. For example, rent a house, transport, buy food, or pay for electricity and water. Besides that, money can satisfy your desires, such as buying good-quality products and going on vacations, and some of our dreams can come true. This leads to the quality of our lives getting better.
On the other hand, I believe that it is necessary to enjoy jobs. Firstly, following your passion gives you a sense of purpose and fulfillment.When you are passionate about something, you are more likely to put in the time and effort needed to accomplish it. Additionally, many people who are just working in their jobs to earn good money are deeply sad and secretly want to change. For example, universities provide a wider range of topics and programmes every year to answer the question that every young person wonders: "What do I want to do in my life? In some cases, people decide to quit their jobs, even well-paid ones, because they evolve in an environment they do not like. This is proof that money cannot satisfy all our needs.
In conclusion, in my opinion, having an interesting job is more prominent than having a well-paid job that one hates. I also believe that almost everyone chooses jobs where they feel more safe and healthy. This would help them work for a long time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: When
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, if, so, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, in some cases, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1404.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69565217391 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50626445253 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598662207358 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.4864337321 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.5882352941 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5882352941 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.29411764706 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.342419335243 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0774477130075 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.130098258753 0.0667982634062 195% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196909896635 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.126931112548 0.056905535591 223% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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