There is no doubt that tourism is one of the most worthwhile contributors to national income. In this following essay, both the benefits and the drawbacks of it will be analyzed clearly and offer my own opinion as well.
Keeping an eye on the bright side, tourism is considered to be an indispensable tool to promote the image of the country. Thanks to tourism, the local stand a good chance of introducing the tradition, culture to people from other parts of the world. Due to the fact that the uniqueness of national identity makes an impression on visitors, the country obviously lure an enormous number of visitors especially foreigners. Besides, tourism plays an important role in fostering the national income. Attracting a large number of visitors creates business for the local residents. As a result of paying a visit to a new place, the visitors have to pay money for accommodation, cuisine, souvenirs, so on. This clearly accelerates the income of not only the nation but also the residents.
Nevertheless, there is a point against the advantages of tourism which is spoiling the environment. Nowadays, many famous destinations are covered in rubbish especially plastic waste. For a prime example, beaches are full of plastic bottles, plastic bags littered directly by visitors. This does damage to underwater pieces seriously as they may accidentally eat plastic waste, which takes their life and lead to an imbalanced ecosystem.
Thanks to what have been analyzed about the pros and cons of tourism, I reach the conclusion that the merits of tourism outweigh the demerits if people raise their awareness of protecting the natural environment.
In conclusion, what we can take advantage of tourism is much more than what it causes to us. Therefore, I take side the bright side of tourism.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, may, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, while, in conclusion, no doubt, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1512.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09090909091 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89330029786 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599326599327 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2442272825 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5625 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6875 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145535538577 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0462639636299 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0390361635617 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0765439665089 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0387071040937 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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