"People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers."
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Decision-making is an important characteristic that an individual should have within them. We are challenged to decide for every step that we take to shape our lives. In such a scenario if we make decisions based on emotion, they might lead to a wrong path which will cause regret for an individual.
I agree with the given prompt as I've seen situations where emotion-based decisions have turned out to be bad. For example, when a child constantly scribes about wanting to eat sweet candies every day, the mother out of love finally caves in and starts giving him sweets. A few weeks later the child starts complaining about toothache. After a thorough check-up with the dentist, the child and mother get to know about the multiple cavities that have been formed over time due to excessive candies. Instead of giving candies every day, the mother could appease the child by setting some restrictions on the number of candies per week.
Another such scenario is when students have to choose a field for graduation. Applying for a course based on its popularity among the students and the highest-paying job in the market can be a bad decision. You need to check the curriculum of the course if you have an affinity for the subjects and are interested in making a career in the field.
Such decisions fueled by emotions may lead to a path in life that we may regret later on. Logical decisions even if tough to make should be taken based on the outcome that will benefit in the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, may, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.5258426966 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 14.8657303371 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 33.0505617978 51% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 58.6224719101 68% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1236.0 2235.4752809 55% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 260.0 442.535393258 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75384615385 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.55969084622 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71164484243 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 215.323595506 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573076923077 0.4932671777 116% => OK
syllable_count: 383.4 704.065955056 54% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.2974954288 60.3974514979 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.0 118.986275619 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 23.4991977007 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 5.21951772744 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210811893493 0.243740707755 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.070060232209 0.0831039109588 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0713959466914 0.0758088955206 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124698481775 0.150359130593 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0329006372345 0.0667264976115 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 14.1392134831 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.8420337079 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 12.1639044944 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 100.480337079 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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