Some people say that in the modern world, getting old is entirely bad. Others, however, say that life for the elderly nowadays is much better than it was in the past. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In recent years, the topic of getting old has been very controversial. while in modern years, some people believe that getting old is entirely bad, others say that the life of an old man is much better than in previous times. this essay will discuss both arguments in depth.
there are a growing number of people who believe that life is very difficult in modern times, and it will become more so as time passes. they have reasons because life is very fast and no one has enough time to take care of their old ones. For instance, in previous times, when there was no technology, people often visited each other for meetups, gatherings, and dinner together; however, now old people get bored staying at home, which affects them mentally and physically. this often results in believing life was good in previous times.
Moreover, many people believe that the lives of old people are getting easier in modern times. because many new things have been invented, which gives a comfortable life to the old people. For example, while people have machines that can do their work that they have done manually in the past, this also reduces their time. For these reasons, people think that life is much better today than in the past. however, in my opinion, life is good in the past, as the old people are accustomed to the previous times, so modern things can affect him mentally and physically, and they are not easily adjusted in the new era.
In conclusion, there are different perspectives on getting old in modern times. Although some say life is not good, others say that it gives you a more comfortable life than ever before. this essay discussed that getting old is bad because it affects you mentally and physically, and also discussed that life was much easier in the past than ever before due to the fact that everything is done through machines, which results in a reduction of time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1560.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71299093656 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31828971265 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.453172205438 0.561755894193 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.7140246587 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.0 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0666666667 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.390703086758 0.244688304435 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144110729211 0.084324248473 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0988585259717 0.0667982634062 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.273613768297 0.151304729494 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0833196331265 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.