Some people believe that international trade and communication with other countries is a positive trend, while others think it is harmful to nations and they might lose their identities. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your own opinion and relevant examples.
Nowadays, it is commonly believed that international business and communication with foreign nations is a positive trend. However, some people believe that it may have harmful impact to countries as thier identities might be lost. I strongly agree with the former group of people. As today we live in an interconnected global world , we as a nation would be left behind if not being part of international businesses.
Although there is no compulsion for any nation to do trade with other countries but doing this will not only bring income to the country but may also spread it's exitence around the world. communication is also very much needed among different nations not only to make their citizens safe and secure in different parts of the world .only communication could make it possible for the nation to be helped or helpful in a situation of natural disaster or tragedy. A very good example of communication is during pandemic in the year 2019 when most of the countries were trying to keep their people safe for this corona virus, it was only through communication when medicines, medical staff and other helps were shared among different developed and developing nations.
At last , I would like to mention that it is very crucial for the countries to do business and communication with each other. it would assist developing nations to grow and expand. At the same time countries can overcome their limitation of resources.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1202.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 240.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00833333333 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83305977994 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5875 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 377.1 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 82.306804093 49.4020404114 167% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.2 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323647045979 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128754379854 0.084324248473 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0760008919716 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209624150551 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0435321760849 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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