Some people think that children should begin their education at a very early age. Some think they should begin at least 7 years old.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Opinions are divided on when children should start their school years. Although beginning studying academically at an early age can foster improved behaviors, I believe that it would be too stressful for the children so they can not gain the knowledge effectively and starting at the age of 7 is a more plausible alternative.
On the one hand, one might argue that giving children early education can force them to be well-behaved family members as soon as they begin to perceive. This is predicated on the assumption that those children will have a chance to familiarize themselves with the school regulations and be taught common morals. This may help them to be less stubborn and more obedient, which obviously benefits themselves and their parents as a whole. However, this line of reasoning is not sound since if children were exposed to academic knowledge at such an early age, they would be overwhelmed and stressed, making them unable to absorb the knowledge efficiently. This would negate any benefits of the aforementioned proposal.
On the other hand, requiring children to attend schools at the age of at least 7 would be a more reasonable choice. This is because children at this age are more mature, enabling them to deal with the potential stress from school lessons, and consequently gain knowledge more effortlessly. In addition, delaying school also spares time for children to play. This would benefit children mentally as through playing, children have to imagine and think more, which develops their problem-solving and learning skills. Undoubtedly, these vital skills will facilitate children’s learning in schools, allowing them to succeed academically.
In conclusion, I believe that giving children early access to education may deteriorate the efficiency of learning process as children may suffer from pressure, and only when children turn 7 should they be given education as the time in early years is crucially important for them to develop both their ability to cope with stress and skills for successful learning.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, however, if, may, so, well, at least, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1732.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28048780488 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88730940871 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52743902439 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 522.0 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.1960152927 49.4020404114 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.230769231 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2307692308 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92307692308 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252231646036 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0912690157946 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0654252973675 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171509943632 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0422100976962 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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