Your friend invited you to go with him/her to a concert next week, however, you are unable to come. Write a letter to your friend.
In your letter
• let your friend know why you can’t go to the concert;
• suggest another activity you can do together;
• explain why you think your friend would enjoy this activity.
Dear Sam,
Hope this letter finds you well. I was ecstatic to recieve the invitation to the concert happening on coming Saturday. However, I am afraid to inform you that I will not be able to make it to the concert owing to my upcoming final presentation of Project Management the same day. Please accept my appologies in advance. I am well aware how excited you are for the concert as we were eyeing on this band for so long. Nonetheless, I am certain you will well understand my situation as you know how critical and essential this presentation is for my final grades, and for how long i have been preparing for it.
Having said that, I have another exciting plan for our long due get together. You know the snow season is coming. I have bought the wonderland tickets in advance for you and myself. You would be surprised to know that I have bought the tickets in less than half the price because of the advance booking. I have planned the whole itenerary which includes two days stay and many activities inside the wonderland. There would be night band, new year show light show coupled with fireworks.
I look forward to your confirmation.
Yours Truly,
Jack
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| 2024-01-02 | Amna Zeeshan | 78 | view |
| 2024-01-01 | Amna Zeeshan | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sam, Hope this letter finds you well. I was e...
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Line 2, column 510, Rule ID: ESSENTIAL_ESSENTIALLY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'essentially'?
Suggestion: essentially
... situation as you know how critical and essential this presentation is for my final grade...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d to your confirmation. Yours Truly, Jack
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, look, nonetheless, so, well, you know, i am afraid
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 965.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 209.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61722488038 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54125998967 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617224880383 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 297.0 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.9029631396 44.8134815571 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.9285714286 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9285714286 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.21428571429 4.34317383033 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229497536069 0.216113520407 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0876303954821 0.0766984524023 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0541040035376 0.0603063233224 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137375009991 0.12726935374 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0271731709816 0.0580467560999 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 8.37731958763 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.92 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.