Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
Advertisements control every mind’s person. There are two beliefs among people which advertisements affect us and make us change our minds another argument is that they are increasing nobody attention about them. In my opinion, ads play a crucial role for companies to sell their goods and products.
On the one side, ads are very effective when people across with them can make them think otherwise and provide those goods even he/she doesn’t need them. Not only can they save time and money but they also familiarize us with fake goods and avoid buying them by knowing ways of detecting them. For example, when you see an ad on TV that first introduces its goods and explains about fake goods that don’t have these standards understand buy which one.
Some others believe ads cannot affect our decisions because they are very common since people don't pay attention to them. persons daily across numerous advertises and don't care about them. The most important point is ads can have sufficient effect even if they are so common. The unknown sector of brain analysis is all of them and you would be able to think about them. Although most of the advertising is junk and their goal is just to sell their products people can be affected when across with them.
Finally, it is not true to say by increasing ads people don't care about them when faced with them. I think advertising has a powerful dark side that most people don't know about it. It is affect on your unknown brain that can control your decision.
In conclusion, companies use advertising to sell their goods. Because of this they make ads to deliver an especial message to people and make a feel inside them that should provide that product.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, so, for example, i think, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 24.0651302605 212% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1416.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76767676768 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33047229866 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535353535354 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.3295605888 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.5 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5625 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3125 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181307306603 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0728344036228 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0438485410955 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118746507722 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0420749750895 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.97 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.