A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not well-managed.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the modern world? Do you think that the benefits of tourism outweigh its drawbacks?
Despite the financial gains for many of countries depended on tourism, it could be the reason for the problems too. In the new world, tourism lead to increase the trade between persons. Firstly, this essay will discuss the cash in from tourism as the one of the main pros. Secondly, bad behaviors when the tourism out of control as a one of the cons.
At the very outset, the vital advantage of the tourism is provide a renewable money to the countries market. There are a kind of countries do not have the multiple income choice, so that, tourism the only way to kill two birds with one stone and attracted people form whole world to visit, having a nice time, and enhance the economy. A prime example for this is the United Arab Of Emirates it is opening a new job opportunities for local people to service in this field and purchasing and selling from this foreigners. As a result, the cash flow for the economy will be stable or have a slightly moving to highest point.
On the other hand, the main disadvantages when the tourists are having taboo habits against the country law and heritage, rather than demonstrate solidarity for the culture. The yearly cost to repairs the tourism side effect are higher than cashback come from them. For instance, a handful of tourists do not cares for break the constitution , besides they destroy a lot of masterpiece items in museums just for fun. It is lead the government and people work together, as one hand never claps, to conservation their history ,therefore they paid a lot of money for this.
In conclusion, the benefits from the tourism, such as money back and new vacancies for local people, should overpass its negative impacts, such as bad attitudes. Over all, Are the best solution for people are prevent all kind of tourism? I consider we should be on walk the line between the investment come from this and the show our dominance to protect the wonderful places too.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1597.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69705882353 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49124679132 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561764705882 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9560773299 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.466666667 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197037860813 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.074833842089 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462820853011 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132265006392 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0587042884086 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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