In many countries, people now wear Western-style dresses such as suits and jeans rather than traditional clothing. Why is this? Is this a positive or negative development?
Instead of ethnic clothing, western-themed outfits, for instance suits and jeans, have been more and more popular among individuals in numerous nations. Besides, this essay addresses some major causes, I would argue that this has more significant downsides which I will outline in the following paragraph.
Regarding the reasonable factors, Western clothing stands out for its functional design, particularly business purposes. It appears that Armani, served as Italian high-end fashion brand for men’s suits, prioritizes convenience by incorporating features (easy closures and adaptable fits). This versatility allows individuals to confidently wear it in a wide range of professional occasions, from everyday meetings to business projects. Additionally, such style thrives on dynamic seasonal trends, constantly offering fresh styles and reinventions that keep wearers modish. Due to fast-paced environment, designers are inspired to create new styles, Vintage Wash Denim Jacket and Boyfriend jeans, reflecting a multicultural perspective on fashion.
By contrast, in my viewpoint, iconic garments such as kimonos, Japan and sarees, India might lose their cultural heritage when current generations barely show their interest in it. It appears that the woven treasures hold a community's history and values, thus, this behaviour leaves country a great loss of authenticity. Furthermore, lack of sufficient revenue to preserve traditional instruments risks a nation losing local artisans. Apparently, fierce competition from mass-produced clothings threatens the very existence of their unique skills. If numerous citizens prefer high-end styles to historical dresses, wonderful costumes would only become a showcase in international events such as Miss Universe and Miss World.
Overall, the reason why Western wear influences people’s preference more than conventional clothing is because it is practical to be day-to-day use and spots on fashionable look. However, I would debate that this behaviour leads to negative impacts, including the loss of national heritage and national designers’ interests.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, besides, furthermore, however, if, look, regarding, so, then, thus, for instance, such as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1819.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 6.06333333333 5.12529762239 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0826593858 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.726666666667 0.561755894193 129% => OK
syllable_count: 551.7 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 22.9183332727 49.4020404114 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 129.928571429 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4285714286 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07142857143 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221832791184 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0600440289426 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0413810450175 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121108169535 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0346793176657 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.0946893788 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.87 12.4159519038 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.47 8.58950901804 134% => OK
difficult_words: 129.0 78.4519038076 164% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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