Government should build more roads to allow more vechiles owner or improve the network of public transport

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: This
this essay will explain the importance of cu...
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Suggestion: Globalization
...n the history of a country and society. globalization is a way to connect the people from one...
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Suggestion: People
...rough internet or other online sources. people are more busy in their screens and they...
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Suggestion:
... no time for their relatives and even to participate in their cultural heritage o...
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Suggestion: Culture
...heritage or activities related to it. culture is as important as blood moving in the ...
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Suggestion: Government
...t will vanish from the sight forever. government should take positive steps to educate t...
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Suggestion: This
...he importance of culture in their life. this will help them to transfer their cultur...
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Suggestion: People
...f not preserving culture and its parts. people are encouraged to take part in cultural...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1085.0 1207.87684729 90% => OK
No of words: 220.0 242.827586207 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93181818182 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78061099772 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 139.433497537 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513636363636 0.580463131201 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 359.1 379.143842365 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.8555828739 50.4703680194 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 108.5 104.977214359 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.9669160288 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.6 7.25397266985 8% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.33497536946 150% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0472329122465 0.242375264174 19% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0205298837834 0.0925447433944 22% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0278797519652 0.071462118173 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0324561195428 0.151781067708 21% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0146439566747 0.0609392437508 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 12.6369458128 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 11.5310837438 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.32886699507 92% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 55.0591133005 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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