Some people believe that success in creative fields, such as painting, fiction writing,
and filmmaking, primarily requires hard work and perseverance. Others believe
that such success mainly requires innate talents that cannot be learned.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own
position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and
supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
The prompt claims that we can learn much more from like-minded people from those whose views contradict our own because disagreement can cause tension, demotivation and impede learning. The given topic is highly contentious because different people may have disparate positions and opinions on the given topic. Some of them go for a given topic, while others can't argue with it at all. I am going to both agree and disagree with the given claims that we can learn much more from people whose views we share from those views contradicts our own. There are three reasons and examples supporting my position are presented in the following paragraphs.
Firstly, being born with talent and a creative mind does mean it helps a little bit easier but, I can't say that becomes a success. For example, In the world, there are many people which are talented in their respective fields. we can see that some people are inspired by seeing famous poets, artists, drawings, and Designs by others and these people become successful in their life.
Furthermore, hard work is the most important factor in becoming a successful person. For instance, the scientists and inventors such as Thomas Edison, popularly known for successfully inventing light but, after 999 trials. Hence we can say that, He was a hardworking scientist and he proved that success is not an innate talents.
Lastly, another example of supporting the given statement is Albert Einstein. At start, he was weak student in his class and his teacher told his mother he was not capable of being a student. In additional, after his mother's praise, at last, he becomes a scientists. Thus, it proves that success archives by hard work.
In sum up, the reasons and examples presented support the claim/position that both agree and disagree on the given topic. The essay highlights the success is gained by hard work. The examples of Albert Einstein and Thomas Edison are illustrated to support the given statements.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 360, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...them go for a given topic, while others cant argue with it at all. I am going to bot...
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Line 1, column 387, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...while others cant argue with it at all. I am going to both agree and disagree wit...
^
Line 3, column 74, Rule ID: LITTLE_BIT[1]
Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
...nd a creative mind does mean it helps a little bit easier but, I cant say that becomes a s...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 97, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
... mean it helps a little bit easier but, I cant say that becomes a success. For ex...
^
Line 3, column 99, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ean it helps a little bit easier but, I cant say that becomes a success. For example...
^^^^
Line 3, column 228, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...re talented in their respective fields. we can see that some people are inspired b...
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Line 7, column 254, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a scientist' or simply 'scientists'?
Suggestion: a scientist; scientists
...his mothers praise, at last, he becomes a scientists. Thus, it proves that success archives ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, lastly, may, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 58.6224719101 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1646.0 2235.4752809 74% => OK
No of words: 328.0 442.535393258 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01829268293 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61427549187 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 215.323595506 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560975609756 0.4932671777 114% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 704.065955056 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.3734922027 60.3974514979 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 91.4444444444 118.986275619 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2222222222 23.4991977007 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.77777777778 5.21951772744 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153853972908 0.243740707755 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0549225151224 0.0831039109588 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0531855903324 0.0758088955206 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.089468793495 0.150359130593 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0465500795186 0.0667264976115 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 14.1392134831 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.8420337079 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 100.480337079 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.