We cannot help everyone in the world that needs help so we should only be concerned with our own communities and countries To what extent do you agree
Some people believe that we should not help people in other countries as long as there are problems in our society. I disagree with this point of view and I believe that we should try to help as many people as possible.
On the one hand, I can understand why some people believe that we should prioritize our local communities for helping. In all countries, there are some individuals who are impoverished and disadvantaged in some way. It is difficult for many people to see that their neighbors or fellow citizens are in a hard situation. Therefore, it is natural they think that it is their responsibility to help poor individuals in their own country first. To make this happen, there are some possible ways for rich people to support their poor counterparts. For example, they can do some voluntary activities, from donating and distributing clothing to serving free food in a soup kitchen. Also, they can help such people with money. In this way, people can ensure that most poor residents in their country are supported.
However, I claim that we are also committed to help people who are in need beyond the national borders. In some countries, problems that people usually face are much more serious than those in our local community, and sometimes local problems can easily be solved. Most of the time, a small donation for helping poor people in national boundaries can have a greater impact on improvement of a situation globally. For example, when children are dying from some curable diseases in some African countries, governments and wealth people in rich countries can save many lives by sending vaccine and play an important role in extinction of dangerous illnesses.
In conclusion, in my view, it is true that we cannot help everyone and each person can have a positive role according to their abilities. All people have to try to help their local charities but national boundaries should not stop them from helping impoverished people in other countries.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, in my view, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1646.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92814371257 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72981658688 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.494011976048 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.3014830242 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.875 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.875 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206493986984 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0865041886384 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0722796685453 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163627421284 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0596143286377 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.