Society should identify those children who have special talent and provide training for them at an early age to develop their talents.
Children are the epitome of purity and they do things with pure heart and real interest. I agree with the statement mentioned that the society should select children with special talent and give them the best training at early stage for nurturing their interest. Identifying a talent within a child and refining their interest will benifit the child in the long run as they will be doing the thing in which their pure interest resides rather than some other half-hearted t random stuff. The below paragraph will provide support to why do I agree about the given statement.
Firstly, if a talent in a child is known at an early stage then proper training can be provided according to the age and as we know to become a maestro in any field the important factor is the amount of time given to practice. As the quote of Bruce lee goes " I dont fear from the 10000 moves that a person has practised 1 time , but I do fear 1 move that he/she has practiced 10000 time". Even countries like China train their atheletes at a very young age which have ultimately shown results in the Olympic medal table. Early training makes a child more discipline , focused and hungry towards the goal.
Secondly, if the talent within the child is explored at an early age then it cuts down the later confusion of exploring the appropriate field and in the course of exploration the important thing lost is time. If a child's special talent is known then he/she will not be forced to focus more on the subjects that have less to contribute in the interested field. For instance , if the child has a more talent in arts and music then the parents or the other external factors wont force them to study hard on irrelevant subjects like maths, physics , chemistry etc. This ultimately reduces the burden on the child and he/she can focus on the interest that ultimately inspires him/her.
However , this might not be the same case always. There have been many instance that a child have multiple specia talent and if the society choose the one that he/she doesnt like much compared to the other than instead of benefiting it becomes burdening. For example, a child might be good at soccer and maths both but if the society chooses to send the child for maths training whereas the real interest of the child is in soccer then this resuts in the supressing the real desire and talent of the child and as a result of this the child might also loose further interest in maths.
To overcome the drawback the society must let children explore with the various interest and let themselves express what their real interest lies in . In this way both the factors that is early training and interest will be aligned perfectly and give extraordinary result in the longg run.
Despite of the above drawback the importance of early training and identification of special talent by society cant be undermine. Keeping both the factors that is interest along with training there are high chances of success as the child will be doing and giving time in the field that excites him/her. And more practice given from an early age will ultimately benefit in acheiving the goal.Thus in my opinion I accord with the statement of society identifying the talents of children and providing them early training.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, thus, whereas, for example, for instance, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 14.8657303371 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 33.0505617978 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 70.0 58.6224719101 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2710.0 2235.4752809 121% => OK
No of words: 572.0 442.535393258 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73776223776 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.89045207381 4.55969084622 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42035771899 2.79657885939 87% => OK
Unique words: 253.0 215.323595506 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.442307692308 0.4932671777 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 833.4 704.065955056 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.9361581287 60.3974514979 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.5 118.986275619 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.6 23.4991977007 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 5.21951772744 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 7.80617977528 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326796086286 0.243740707755 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109218200437 0.0831039109588 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0952038222772 0.0758088955206 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185605075255 0.150359130593 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0676503813659 0.0667264976115 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 14.1392134831 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 100.480337079 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.8971910112 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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