Some people think saving money is good, but others think that spending money is a better way to enjoy life. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Most people think that spending the money that they earned is the best way to enjoy their lives. Another group use this money to create an investment plan and saving for a rainy day. In this essay, I will offer my personal view point about both perspectives and states my point of view.
On the one hand, saving is an important habit that has been practising for years. First, saving money make people more independent, it is the best way to face financial troubles and let people think more clearly about future. With the advancement of technology, human beings be replscecible at their workplace so we should have backup funds. Secondly , it is necessary to save money for health emergency either for self and our family. Take my family as an example, during the block period due to Covid 19 pademic, my family couldn’t go to work and unable to earn livings so the money we had saved over the past time helped us get through this tough situation. Moreover, people also save money for the next generation to provide better education, highly necessary for succesful future career.
On the other hand, some people burn all their earning for happiness because of their viewpont: should live in the moment, they want to establish the best moment and purchasing everything they want. Further more, in some places with a luxurious lifestyle, spending all your money has become a culture that highly prevalent in the West with a slogan “work hard, party hard” means people work hard during the weekdays and have fun over the weekend. For instance, in the UK, hardly anyone speak about saving money for the future, they just spend it on party, traveling... because their government has serveral benefits for them after retirements.
In conclusion, as far as I can see, there should be a balance between money saving and spending. Depending on each person's living needs and economic conditions but it's really necessary to keep some money for a rainy day.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Most people think that spending the money tha...
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Line 1, column 200, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
... saving for a rainy day. In this essay, I will offer my personal view point about...
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Line 3, column 351, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...so we should have backup funds. Secondly , it is necessary to save money for healt...
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Line 3, column 608, Rule ID: PAST_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'pastime'?
Suggestion: pastime
...ings so the money we had saved over the past time helped us get through this tough situat...
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Line 4, column 108, Rule ID: IN_THE_MOMENT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'at the moment' (=currently)?
Suggestion: at the moment
... because of their viewpont: should live in the moment, they want to establish the best moment...
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Line 4, column 485, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'anyone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'speaks'.
Suggestion: speaks
... For instance, in the UK, hardly anyone speak about saving money for the future, they...
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Line 5, column 26, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
... retirements. In conclusion, as far as I can see, there should be a balance betw...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1625.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86526946108 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44537561217 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59880239521 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.1299231621 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.333333333 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2666666667 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.2 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275343016984 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0959573827401 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.075880910276 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175094630827 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0536890130477 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.