Some people think that success is the best measure for intelligence,while others think intelligence can be measured in other ways.
What’s your opinion
My first essay seif raouf
Most people believe this measure of intelligence in the part of success while the rest of the people believe that intelligence can be measured in another ways. have you ever think about it?
People don’t need to be smartest to be successful in life while people can be successful in different ways. This essay will discuss hard work, followed by work on mentality.
Firstly, The most important thing if you are intelligence is hard-working.
Explanation of Hard work is putting in more physical effort,and what you do and how you do to achieve your goal. An example, person who is holding two jobs to work and to run his family, is described as a hardworking person. The result of hard work person is always success.
The second important effort to get the best measure of intelligence is In every successful story needs mental effort like work on your mentality. Work in your mentality is investing in your self that it helps you To achieve the most successful life also it will help you to set goals ,however Changing your mindset may mean making new friends, leaving a job, or moving to a new area. Example of really famous person is Elon musk one of the person who has a good mindset by working in her mental health, and his visionary mindset and leadership.
People think that success in the measure for cleverness, but other people cleverness can be measured in another way most people don’t need to be cleverness to achieve success because you can be successful in different ways. My opinion is intelligence can be measured in other ways.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, really, second, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1310.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76363636364 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63976958674 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.490909090909 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.4461152836 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.769230769 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1538461538 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.38461538462 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.407260687872 0.244688304435 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146766937698 0.084324248473 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.152736148047 0.0667982634062 229% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188964782965 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.182418505852 0.056905535591 321% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.03 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 78.4519038076 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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