People nowadays sleep less than they used to in the past. What do you think is the reason behind this? What are the effects on individuals and people around them?
Task
The contraction of the people sleep in more short time than they used to do in the past. This essay will firstly discuss the causes of people sleep less time than they used to be Followed by the effects of the problem.
In my opinion, I believe that people need to sleep more than 6 hours in a day to get the most energy to do the best things.
the most cause that makes the people don’t sleep well like before is mobile phones.it is the dominance of controlling the whole world rooted in how do people use it. People customarily use the mobile phones everyday for everything specific detail also do you have interaction between the other people. In the light off, if people stopped using phones at night, it will help them to sleep well, because the develop of many options and apps that people can use nowadays. As a result, turning off your phone may help you fall asleep more easily.
The decline in sleep duration today has significant effects on both physical and mental health. Reduced sleep weakens the immune system, making individuals more vulnerable to illnesses and chronic conditions like heart disease and diabetes. It also affects cognitive functions, impairing memory, decision-making, and concentration. Mood disorders such as anxiety and depression are more common among those who sleep less. Additionally, lack of sleep diminishes productivity and increases the risk of accidents, contributing to a rise in workplace errors and road accidents.
In conclusion, People today get less sleep compared to earlier times which it might Effect them on the future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...effects of the problem. In my opinion, I believe that people need to sleep more ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...the most energy to do the best things. the most cause that makes the people don’t ...
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Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...eople customarily use the mobile phones everyday for everything specific detail also do ...
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Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: Affect
...ompared to earlier times which it might Effect them on the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, so, well, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1324.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97744360902 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65906164896 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62030075188 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.9297006709 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.846153846 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4615384615 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.38461538462 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.368448513156 0.244688304435 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127901321812 0.084324248473 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0949224992945 0.0667982634062 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208592692872 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0980934890375 0.056905535591 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.