Some people choose to have their first child at an older age.
What are the reasons?
Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
Recently, having babies later has become a phenomenon which stems from a confluence of economic, educational factors. Although this appears to ensure a more stable economic life for families and better upbringing for the children, I suppose the drawbacks regarding population issues are more significant.
Some of the primary reasons for delaying parenthood are closely linked to urbanisation and education. First, when people move to cities, life becomes more expensive and faster. Therefore, they want to further their careers to achieve financial security before they can afford to have a child, allowing them to provide their kids with more resources and more stable upbringing. Second, one of the most direct correlations to fertility is education of girls and women. Undoubtedly, the longer they stay in education, the later they leave it to have a child. Besides, the perspective of would-be parents nowadays is that they should be well-educated and well-informed about parenting knowledge and skills before giving birth. All of these elements combine, making the trend more popular.
Having children at an older age allows parents more time to prepare for finance and essential parenting knowledge and skills as ignorance in taking care of pregnancy and babies can result in health risk for both mothers and her babies. Besides, raising and educating a human is significantly complicated and requires a stable income. Therefore, emotional maturity and life experience are important to ensure better child-rearing. However, this could bring more challenges to both individuals and society. As the older women get, the more difficult it becomes to be pregnant. Due to their age, many women nowadays need some medical interventions such as In vitro fertilization (IVF) treatment - which can be significantly costly. Besides, this trend contributes to an aging population where there would be fewer working people to support young and elderly individuals in need. Also, the older population would affect innovation and society as they may not want to invest in novel ideas for the future.
In conclusion, the increasing popularity of giving birth later in life typically stems from financial and education elements. In my view, this trend brings more concerns for both parents and society as a whole.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 232, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...and better upbringing for the children, I suppose the drawbacks regarding populat...
^
Line 3, column 293, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... before they can afford to have a child, allowing them to provide their kids with...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, may, regarding, second, so, therefore, well, as for, i suppose, in conclusion, such as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1953.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 360.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.425 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87710437873 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577777777778 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 624.6 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5138702595 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.789473684 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9473684211 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.26315789474 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147209290519 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0418374881915 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0413291958162 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0741832548755 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0659238178365 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 232, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...and better upbringing for the children, I suppose the drawbacks regarding populat...
^
Line 3, column 293, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... before they can afford to have a child, allowing them to provide their kids with...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, may, regarding, second, so, therefore, well, as for, i suppose, in conclusion, such as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1953.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 360.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.425 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87710437873 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577777777778 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 624.6 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5138702595 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.789473684 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9473684211 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.26315789474 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147209290519 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0418374881915 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0413291958162 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0741832548755 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0659238178365 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.