few languages are increasingly spoken in different countries, while the usage of others is rapidly declining. is this a positive or negative trend?
It is a growing concern that, increasing predominancy of some languages in different parts of the world impacted in partial or complete disappearance of a few other languages. There are both advantages and disadvantages for this trend. However, I tend to believe that, negative impacts outweigh positive effects.
First and foremost, languages tightly bound together with the culture and heritage of a country or a region. Hence the disappearance of a language may eventually results in the death of a particular culture which is dangerous for the integrity of different cultures in the world. Secondly, the existence of different languages play a major role in stabilizing the economy of specific country or a region. For example, various traditions and languages attracts tourists from another traditions which boom the local economy and national revenue.
To add on, different languages and cultures make the world lively and enjoyable. Indeed, if the world contains same language and same culture, there will not be anything to enjoy in the life and there is no point in travelling to different parts of the world which may have adverse effect on many areas such as business and economy.
In contrast, the use of one language or a few language in the whole world helps to ease communication among different nationalities and decrease misunderstandings and fights among different nations. Moreover it may aid in the growth of economy through fast and efficient business. International business for instance, may become more rapid and convenient through effective communication.
In conclusion, increase in the use of certain languages may result in the death of less widely spoken languages. Although, there are some benefits when following a unique language, I strongly believe that, disadvantages of this outweigh the advantages.
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Essay evaluation report
a language may eventually results in the death
a language may eventually result in the death
the existence of different languages play a major role
the existence ... plays a major role
Sentence: For example, various traditions and languages attracts tourists from another traditions which boom the local economy and national revenue.
Description: The fragment languages attracts tourists is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace attracts with verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Description: A determiner/pronoun, singular is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to another and traditions
Sentence: It is a growing concern that, increasing predominancy of some languages in different parts of the world impacted in partial or complete disappearance of a few other languages.
Error: predominancy Suggestion: No alternate word
flaws:
No. of Different Words: 152 200 //Don't repeat words, phrases and sentences. like: 'outweigh'
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 6.0 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 14 15
No. of Words: 288 350
No. of Characters: 1514 1500
No. of Different Words: 152 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.12 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.257 4.6
Word Length SD: 3.012 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 117 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 105 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 77 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 43 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 20.571 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.417 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.714 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.346 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.614 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.065 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 110, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
... and heritage of a country or a region. Hence the disappearance of a language may eve...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 43, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun language seems to be countable; consider using: 'few languages'.
Suggestion: few languages
... contrast, the use of one language or a few language in the whole world helps to ease commun...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 200, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...ngs and fights among different nations. Moreover it may aid in the growth of economy thr...
^^^^^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in conclusion', 'in contrast', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.261829652997 0.247107183377 106% => OK
Verbs: 0.10094637224 0.155533422707 65% => OK
Adjectives: 0.110410094637 0.0946595960268 117% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0441640378549 0.0501214627716 88% => OK
Pronouns: 0.01261829653 0.0437548338989 29% => Some pronouns wanted.
Prepositions: 0.145110410095 0.122226691241 119% => OK
Participles: 0.0252365930599 0.0403226058552 63% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.0890505522 2.80594681477 110% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0157728706625 0.0326793684256 48% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.11356466877 0.0861772015684 132% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.018927444795 0.021408717616 88% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.01261829653 0.011925033212 106% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1842.0 1933.35771543 95% => OK
No of words: 288.0 316.048096192 91% => OK
Chars per words: 6.39583333333 6.12580529183 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20517956788 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.413194444444 0.374742101984 110% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.375 0.28420135186 132% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.291666666667 0.203846283523 143% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.173611111111 0.137316102897 126% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0890505522 2.80594681477 110% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.037074148 89% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541666666667 0.56093040696 97% => OK
Word variations: 55.0891063899 60.7387585426 91% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0891783567 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.5714285714 20.7743622355 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.6252686903 49.517814964 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.571428571 127.492653851 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5714285714 20.7743622355 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 0.814263465372 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 3.99599198397 75% => OK
Readability: 58.0714285714 49.1944974215 118% => OK
Elegance: 2.74 1.69124875643 162% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32787135786 0.332605444948 99% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.115391644347 0.102741220458 112% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0942311654538 0.0668466124924 141% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.598498132216 0.534860350844 112% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.160273321013 0.148594505496 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138612311733 0.134430193775 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0834808380885 0.0742795772207 112% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.350147720575 0.324371583561 108% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0645045748374 0.0638462369009 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224986109077 0.228012699653 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0762686311984 0.058150111329 131% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.68436873747 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.41683366733 29% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 5.90881763527 118% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.5751503006 155% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 10.4468937876 115% => OK
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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