Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:
It is often not a good thing for people to move to a new town or a new country because they will lose their friends.
When one family have enough money and can affoad a house in a new, they will move and live in the new place. Because of advanced hospitals where you can get a better treatment while you are silk, and top high schools for your child where they will be well educated. Besides, going shopping and palying in the park are pretty enjoyable, that is, it always prove to be higher level of your live when moving to a new place. I maintain that moving to a new is indeed a good thing for people.
First of all, new place or a new town will broaden you horizen. Admittedly, as living in the new block with strange neigbours, you know them gradually and you make friends from the begining, which make your always keep being curious about people and things around your new home. More importantly, it's a precious chance to know yourself in deep when interacting with a new environment. In fact, my home had move from villege to city when I was 12. At first, I was kind of scared by the prosperity of the city life, heavy traffic, nosise, and complexity are the first impression. However, all of these new stuff opened my eyes and I began to try to make friends in the new school, and the quanlity of education ensure me finally entered a top university in China.
Secondly, it's a common phnomenon that people enter into cities or go for a exatic live. Owing to this trend, our city becomes not only bigger but more prosperous and developed. For cities, they need more labours to build more buildings and briges. For the imigrant countries, they are so appealing for their culture, the imigrant tend may encourage the transportation of this popular culture all over the world. Both aspects support and sitimulate people' moving.
In addition, moving away from hometown does not mean losing our old friend. Conversely, we can not only keep in touch with our kind friends and relatives, but also bring gifts for them when it is spring Festival we reunions. I suppose they would be interested in the life in the city or foreign country. What's more, we can also tell them how to move to city, and what should be care about while tranfering.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...re pretty enjoyable, that is, it always prove to be higher level of your live when mo...
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... a new place. I maintain that moving to a new is indeed a good thing for people. ...
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... is indeed a good thing for people. First of all, new place or a new town wi...
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... entered a top university in China. Secondly, it's a common phnomenon t...
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...that people enter into cities or go for a exatic live. Owing to this trend, our c...
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...and sitimulate people' moving. In addition, moving away from hometown ...
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Message: Did you mean 'cared'?
Suggestion: cared
...how to move to city, and what should be care about while tranfering.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'besides', 'but', 'conversely', 'finally', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'well', 'while', 'i suppose', 'in addition', 'in fact', 'kind of', 'you know', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.191441441441 0.229887763892 83% => OK
Verbs: 0.153153153153 0.158761421928 96% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0923423423423 0.0866891130778 107% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0540540540541 0.046263068375 117% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0833333333333 0.0685040099705 122% => OK
Prepositions: 0.105855855856 0.118717715034 89% => OK
Participles: 0.036036036036 0.0351676179071 102% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.47181412908 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0247747747748 0.0309702414327 80% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0743243243243 0.0887237588012 84% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0225225225225 0.0209618222197 107% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.027027027027 0.0139019557991 194% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2174.0 2387.08602151 91% => OK
No of words: 383.0 408.028673835 94% => OK
Chars per words: 5.67624020888 5.86048508987 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.48200974243 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.295039164491 0.338922669872 87% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.206266318538 0.251872472559 82% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.135770234987 0.174417080927 78% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0939947780679 0.112833075102 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47181412908 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57180156658 0.524397521467 109% => OK
Word variations: 66.2236821115 59.2087087015 112% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6684587814 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.1578947368 20.5533526081 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2269132731 48.84282405 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.421052632 120.699889404 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1578947368 20.5533526081 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.05263157895 0.644075263715 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.54480286738 126% => OK
Readability: 40.7845265906 45.7405998639 89% => OK
Elegance: 1.14728682171 1.45489161554 79% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.350682506608 0.300154397459 117% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0928457412148 0.103427244359 90% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0597502288078 0.0752933317313 79% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.4547592591 0.497263757937 91% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.113311368193 0.151897553556 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122613823493 0.114077575197 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0671065473302 0.0781384742642 86% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.273521239401 0.336927656856 81% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0853697677124 0.067059652881 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223442197888 0.210909579961 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0447143661853 0.0618886996521 72% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8870967742 109% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.86379928315 26% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.91756272401 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 8.42114695341 107% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.4623655914 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.75985663082 145% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 13.6433691756 95% => OK
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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