TPO 19- Independent Task
What an important aspect of human beings' lives which plays a prominent role in their prosperity, to a great extent, is knowledge. Although, there is a consequence on its indisputable role, the best way of getting information is still a moot point. Germane to this fact, a question which is the matter of debate, a controversial one, is whether it better to get information from many different news sources. Althoug some people may be on the belief that it is not a good way of getting information, I am personally of the conviction that it is essential in being well-informed for two conspicuous reasons.
One compelling reason giving in favor of this thesis is that it provides us the apportunity of having access to a huge amount of information. To shed some ligh on this premise, it is worth pointing out that many of news sources focus on few topics. This means that if we rely merely on a few number of news sources, we will get information of those limited topics. As an illustrations, according to the results of a manuscrpit entitled "The main focus of online websites" published in an academic journal, most of news websites are related to the news of politics, e.g. 70%. Therefore, if we only consider them as news sources, we will not get information of accidents, weather, etc. As you can see, if get information from limited news sources, we will not be well-informed.
Another reason which cannot go unnoticed is that we will have a better understanding of situations and news if we employ many news sources. To elucidate more on this issue, it is crystal clear that each source has different reporters than others. Nonetheless, different people have different points of views on news. Hence, if we read news of different sources and the reporters' comments, we will understand all the aspects of the news. For instance, last year there was an election in may country. In order to have a better understanding of the candidats' policies, I checkd ten websites and two newspapers. I realized that eigth of these sources had a consensus on one of the candidates, and after reading their opinions, I agreed with them. This taught me that if we use different news sources, we can have a better understanding of news.
To wrap it up, I am personally one of the proponents who cites a clear bias in favor of the idea that getting information from many news sources will help us to be well-informed. To recaputilate the reasons, not only will we have access to more information, but also helps us in understanding the news better. To my way of thinking, everybody shoud utilize different news sources to get information.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 379, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...ether it better to get information from many different news sources. Althoug some people may b...
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Line 3, column 289, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun number seems to be countable; consider using: 'few numbers'.
Suggestion: few numbers
... This means that if we rely merely on a few number of news sources, we will get informatio...
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Line 3, column 369, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an illustration' or simply 'illustrations'?
Suggestion: an illustration; illustrations
...information of those limited topics. As an illustrations, according to the results of a manuscrp...
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Line 3, column 441, Rule ID: MAIN_FOCUS[1]
Message: Use simply 'focus'.
Suggestion: focus
...he results of a manuscrpit entitled The main focus of online websites published in an acad...
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Line 7, column 311, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ps us in understanding the news better. To my way of thinking, everybody shoud uti...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'e.g.', 'hence', 'if', 'may', 'nonetheless', 'so', 'still', 'therefore', 'well', 'for instance', 'to a great extent']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.236790606654 0.229887763892 103% => OK
Verbs: 0.135029354207 0.158761421928 85% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0919765166341 0.0866891130778 106% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0313111545988 0.046263068375 68% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0684931506849 0.0685040099705 100% => OK
Prepositions: 0.140900195695 0.118717715034 119% => OK
Participles: 0.027397260274 0.0351676179071 78% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.9854616936 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0293542074364 0.0309702414327 95% => OK
Particles: 0.00391389432485 0.00188951952338 207% => OK
Determiners: 0.0939334637965 0.0887237588012 106% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0234833659491 0.0209618222197 112% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00978473581213 0.0139019557991 70% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2628.0 2387.08602151 110% => OK
No of words: 455.0 408.028673835 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.77582417582 5.86048508987 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61852021839 4.48200974243 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.318681318681 0.338922669872 94% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.250549450549 0.251872472559 99% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.193406593407 0.174417080927 111% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.142857142857 0.112833075102 127% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9854616936 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.468131868132 0.524397521467 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 52.3520274607 59.2087087015 88% => OK
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6684587814 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.6818181818 20.5533526081 101% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2455032774 48.84282405 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.454545455 120.699889404 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6818181818 20.5533526081 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.590909090909 0.644075263715 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.54480286738 90% => OK
Readability: 45.7367632368 45.7405998639 100% => OK
Elegance: 1.725 1.45489161554 119% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.300154397459 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.125216517502 0.103427244359 121% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0924344859863 0.0752933317313 123% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.501491957903 0.497263757937 101% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.174577649031 0.151897553556 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.114077575197 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0781384742642 0% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.451895105616 0.336927656856 134% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0454332405374 0.067059652881 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.210909579961 0% => The content is off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0618886996521 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8870967742 109% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.86379928315 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.91756272401 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 13.0 8.42114695341 154% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.4623655914 162% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 20.0 13.6433691756 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.