Men and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks.
As Mark Twain said "No one responsible how we are born,the condition in which one die is dependent on yourself ". The statement which is stated by the Mark reflects that no one is responsible on which conditions they are born and we are responsible for what we have at the end of our life.Men and Women have many physical differences in their bodies and because of that we cannot say that they both are not not equally suited.
Firstly,if we take example of giving birth to child only the woman can give birth to child.But the man cannot give birth to a child since he is not gifted to give birth to a child. Moreover, when we take a woman only she is not responsible for giving birth to a child both the man and woman are responsible for engendering a child. The physical aspects may vary for both genders but they are equally suited in many tasks.
Secondly,for an instance Mary Kom is one of the great woman boxer who proved that women have same physical fitness as man. Mary Kom is the mother of two children and she used to climb mountains to bring fresh drinking water for the family. She proved that she is no more less than a man by winning a gold medal in the Olympics .
Thirdly,there are many tasks that are well suited for both men and women. There are some ideas which are only suited for men.For example men are progressive and they are leaders in the company. Does this really comfit the traits of men?Of course not we have many women CEO's who are leading their own companies. It does not depend upon the physical fitness of a person it depends upon the mind set of a person in which aspect they are strong in and they have to be very strong in doing task they wanted to.
However,if we take some of the tasks such as washing clothes,caring the children can be done by women. In some of the houses the man who are house husbands can do the jobs and they are doing in their houses too. It will reduce some pain for their wife because they are the working women and by coming home they will be very tired of their work and it will give some relief for them when their husbands do some work for them.
To sum up,I elucidate that an individual should not under estimate his or her ability by their differences or by their weaknesses. One who overcomes his or her weakness and prove the world to be wrong is the real champion.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'firstly', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'really', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'third', 'thirdly', 'well', 'for example', 'of course', 'such as', 'to sum up']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.203742203742 0.240241500013 85% => OK
Verbs: 0.180873180873 0.157235817809 115% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0623700623701 0.0880659088768 71% => OK
Adverbs: 0.049896049896 0.0497285424764 100% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0914760914761 0.0444667217837 206% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.122661122661 0.12292977631 100% => OK
Participles: 0.037422037422 0.0406280797675 92% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.28394768501 2.79330140395 82% => OK
Infinitives: 0.024948024948 0.030933414821 81% => OK
Particles: 0.002079002079 0.0016655270985 125% => OK
Determiners: 0.101871101871 0.0997080785238 102% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.02079002079 0.0249443105267 83% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.029106029106 0.0148568991511 196% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2358.0 2732.02544248 86% => OK
No of words: 441.0 452.878318584 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34693877551 6.0361032391 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58257569496 4.58838876751 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.233560090703 0.366273622748 64% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.151927437642 0.280924506359 54% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.104308390023 0.200843997647 52% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0612244897959 0.132149295362 46% => More words length more than 8 chars wanted.
Word Length SD: 2.28394768501 2.79330140395 82% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 219.290929204 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.43537414966 0.48968727796 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 47.5667892498 55.4138127331 86% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6194690265 82% => OK
Sentence length: 25.9411764706 23.380412469 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.3922339007 59.4972553346 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.705882353 141.124799967 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9411764706 23.380412469 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.05882352941 0.674092028746 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.94800884956 121% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.21349557522 326% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 41.1339202348 51.4728631049 80% => OK
Elegance: 1.12903225806 1.64882698954 68% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.363257615592 0.391690518653 93% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.183629510999 0.123202303941 149% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.130711893109 0.077325440228 169% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.632607568449 0.547984918172 115% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.135332402955 0.149214159877 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.154595183493 0.161403998019 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119384936889 0.0892212321368 134% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.247443014886 0.385218514788 64% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0854900880576 0.0692045440612 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205655672333 0.275328986314 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105817445962 0.0653680567796 162% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.4325221239 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.30420353982 94% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88274336283 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 7.22455752212 83% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.66592920354 82% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.70907079646 148% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 13.5995575221 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.