The well-being of a society is enhanced when many of its people question authority.
Society is a group of people with common values and ideas, where every member work towards the greater good of the
society. Leaders are chosen to steer the society towards the shared goal, But to human is to err and the leader are
not immune to mistake.Hence i firmly believe that people should always the question the authority.
Its clear in societies, especially in democratically elected systems, its the will of the people which decides
the direction of the society. The politicians only are given the power to administer as representatives
and are not considered as the power themselves. The questioning the people in authority is not the right of the
people but also a the citizens duty to correct the government when it strays away. An excellent example would
be in india where the state government was forced down common citizens for corruption in the goverment.
People of the society have a good idea on the ground realities and know what is best for the future,
when the government fails to work towards the aspirations of the people, people can force the government to relook
on there policies. Recently referendum in England to leave the EU can be considered a good example, Eu begin a european
agency was considered a foreign entity which did not represent the values of England.
It has been proved time and again that absolute power corrupts and festers the society,In modern day north Korea
the government in power(peoples republic of korea) hold absolute power over the nation of north Korea,
The authorities lead a lavish lifestyle with all the luxury of modern society,contrasting the a rustic and backward lifestyle
lead by the common citizens. The citizens are forced into starvation and depend on the generosity of the outside world to support
them while ruling class can oppress the common folk with terrible atrocity.
Society that we live in is very fluid and people who are represented will raise there voices against the existing social
authority to bring changes which can have profound impact, Abolition of slavery in America has had profound positive impact on the
todays society,if people of color had not questioned the authority today Barack obama would have become the president of America.
In conclusion, freedom to criticize the people in authority is good sign of healthy society and the citizens to should be encouraged
to exercise this precious right whenever they feel like.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'hence', 'if', 'look', 'so', 'while', 'as for', 'in conclusion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.262790697674 0.240241500013 109% => OK
Verbs: 0.16976744186 0.157235817809 108% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0790697674419 0.0880659088768 90% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0395348837209 0.0497285424764 80% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0186046511628 0.0444667217837 42% => OK
Prepositions: 0.120930232558 0.12292977631 98% => OK
Participles: 0.0488372093023 0.0406280797675 120% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.74949000809 2.79330140395 98% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0325581395349 0.030933414821 105% => OK
Particles: 0.00232558139535 0.0016655270985 140% => OK
Determiners: 0.137209302326 0.0997080785238 138% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0232558139535 0.0249443105267 93% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0232558139535 0.0148568991511 157% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2446.0 2732.02544248 90% => OK
No of words: 402.0 452.878318584 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.08457711443 6.0361032391 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.58838876751 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.383084577114 0.366273622748 105% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.261194029851 0.280924506359 93% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.186567164179 0.200843997647 93% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.121890547264 0.132149295362 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74949000809 2.79330140395 98% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 219.290929204 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517412935323 0.48968727796 106% => OK
Word variations: 57.5168976651 55.4138127331 104% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6194690265 58% => OK
Sentence length: 33.5 23.380412469 143% => OK
Sentence length SD: 85.5631670496 59.4972553346 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 203.833333333 141.124799967 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.5 23.380412469 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.75 0.674092028746 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 22.0 4.94800884956 445% => There are something wrong with the essay format.
Language errors: 15.0 5.21349557522 288% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 59.6194029851 51.4728631049 116% => OK
Elegance: 1.89795918367 1.64882698954 115% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.381280556328 0.391690518653 97% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.137414905283 0.123202303941 112% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0347224046725 0.077325440228 45% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.858929799669 0.547984918172 157% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.230377707471 0.149214159877 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.211484025919 0.161403998019 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0995183992488 0.0892212321368 112% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.193117486693 0.385218514788 50% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.113751349622 0.0692045440612 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165432976601 0.275328986314 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0898795574233 0.0653680567796 137% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.4325221239 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.30420353982 57% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88274336283 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 7.22455752212 97% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 3.66592920354 55% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.70907079646 37% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 13.5995575221 74% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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