modern technology now allow rapid and uncontrolled access to and exchange information. far from being benefical, this is a danger to our societies.
what are your views?
Modern technology give a easy way to control and exchange informations. This phenomenon create many danger to our societies. First danger are problems. Second hazard is the most dangerous is criminal problems.
Modern technology like internet to get information about someone is easy. For example mostly every people in the world especially youngsters have social media and all of them are active user. Every days they not only upload their status, photos, and video but also place or location of them. so to know who they are, where they are, with whom they are, and others is not too difficult.
The main problem caused by this happen is unsafe data. By understand how to build the internet programs people able to crack of thief information. one of the most famous news about this is wikileaks which share secret of United State embassy.
according these treat i can conclude if newest technology made for us to enjoy our life however it also create many treat to us
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 24, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
Modern technology give a easy way to control and exchange inform...
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Line 1, column 89, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'creates'.
Suggestion: creates
... exchange informations. This phenomenon create many danger to our societies. First dan...
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Line 1, column 96, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun danger seems to be countable; consider using: 'many dangers'.
Suggestion: many dangers
...ge informations. This phenomenon create many danger to our societies. First danger are prob...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...deo but also place or location of them. so to know who they are, where they are, w...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... and others is not too difficult. The main problem caused by this happen is un...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: One
...ple able to crack of thief information. one of the most famous news about this is w...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: According
...hare secret of United State embassy. according these treat i can conclude if newest te...
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Line 7, column 23, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...State embassy. according these treat i can conclude if newest technology made ...
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Line 7, column 105, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'creates'?
Suggestion: creates
...or us to enjoy our life however it also create many treat to us
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Line 7, column 112, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun treat seems to be countable; consider using: 'many treats'.
Suggestion: many treats
...o enjoy our life however it also create many treat to us
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... however it also create many treat to us
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'second', 'so', 'for example']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.263736263736 0.247107183377 107% => OK
Verbs: 0.148351648352 0.155533422707 95% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0934065934066 0.0946595960268 99% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0659340659341 0.0501214627716 132% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0659340659341 0.0437548338989 151% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.0824175824176 0.122226691241 67% => OK
Participles: 0.0164835164835 0.0403226058552 41% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.44201888498 2.80594681477 87% => OK
Infinitives: 0.043956043956 0.0326793684256 135% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0714285714286 0.0861772015684 83% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00549450549451 0.021408717616 26% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.0274725274725 0.011925033212 230% => Maybe 'Which' is overused. If other WH_determiners like 'Who, What, Whom, Whose...' are used too in sentences, then there are no issues.
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 979.0 1933.35771543 51% => OK
No of words: 166.0 316.048096192 53% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.89759036145 6.12580529183 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 4.20517956788 85% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.325301204819 0.374742101984 87% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.192771084337 0.28420135186 68% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.150602409639 0.203846283523 74% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.102409638554 0.137316102897 75% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44201888498 2.80594681477 87% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 176.037074148 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.698795180723 0.56093040696 125% => OK
Word variations: 75.4417348507 60.7387585426 124% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0891783567 75% => OK
Sentence length: 13.8333333333 20.7743622355 67% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.3279406633 49.517814964 57% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.5833333333 127.492653851 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8333333333 20.7743622355 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.666666666667 0.814263465372 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 3.99599198397 275% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 33.1104417671 49.1944974215 67% => OK
Elegance: 1.29411764706 1.69124875643 77% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325171634378 0.332605444948 98% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0950761397684 0.102741220458 93% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.064287891139 0.0668466124924 96% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.51932172126 0.534860350844 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.171658052388 0.148594505496 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125770221869 0.134430193775 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0745961353083 0.0742795772207 100% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.127034474662 0.324371583561 39% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0551353161277 0.0638462369009 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195607523855 0.228012699653 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0926938629281 0.058150111329 159% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.68436873747 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.41683366733 29% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 5.90881763527 85% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.5751503006 78% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 8.0 10.4468937876 77% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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