Present your perspective on the issue below, "It is often necessary, even desirable, for political leaders to withhold information from the public."
When it comes to the issue this question that whether politicians withhold some information from people, some people believe that it is necessary people be aware of all news. However, others have the opposite view. As far as I am concerned, this question is the controversial topic, and we cannot find the answer for it easily. Before I give my opinion, it would be better to discuss this matter from several points of view.
First at all let us to take a look on why some people dislike the idea of having access to all information. The main duty of every leader is to provide proper situation for people and put them away from any dangerous. There are many conditions that politicians prefer to withhold information such as terrorist attacks, horrible events. In fact, sometimes, the country is in the sensitive condition that leader cannot put people on the news because it can make public’s panic. Hence, it would be difficult for leaders to control people, and make corect decisions. So, in some situation putting information on people disposal not only can not suitable, but also may intensify predicaments.
Contrary, under some circumstances it would be better that people be aware of news, and withholding information can bring numerous negative consequences for people. As we all know, the constructive criticism plays a crucial role on country's progress, because leaders cannot consider all aspects of matters. Therefore, we cannot anticipate that people; especially journalists have the realistic judgments, if they have not been sufficient information. I think that there is not a better example than president election, which is hold once in every four years. At that time, people have a right to know information about candidates, because it can help people to gain the deeper insight of them and elect best a candidate. I think that a great advantage of well-informed people lies in the fact that people can think critically and help leaders to manage the country.
All above evidence supports that this undeniable fact that answering this question requires to assess the country condition. Nevertheless, I strongly believe that in the most cases, people should be aware of information.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'nevertheless', 'so', 'therefore', 'well', 'i think', 'in fact', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.228710462287 0.240241500013 95% => OK
Verbs: 0.148418491484 0.157235817809 94% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0827250608273 0.0880659088768 94% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0559610705596 0.0497285424764 113% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0510948905109 0.0444667217837 115% => OK
Prepositions: 0.126520681265 0.12292977631 103% => OK
Participles: 0.0121654501217 0.0406280797675 30% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.86094472493 2.79330140395 102% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0267639902676 0.030933414821 87% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.102189781022 0.0997080785238 102% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0340632603406 0.0249443105267 137% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00973236009732 0.0148568991511 66% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2231.0 2732.02544248 82% => OK
No of words: 361.0 452.878318584 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.18005540166 6.0361032391 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.58838876751 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.387811634349 0.366273622748 106% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.277008310249 0.280924506359 99% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.202216066482 0.200843997647 101% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.14404432133 0.132149295362 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86094472493 2.79330140395 102% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 219.290929204 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537396121884 0.48968727796 110% => OK
Word variations: 58.7370789901 55.4138127331 106% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6194690265 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0555555556 23.380412469 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.5133226774 59.4972553346 53% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.944444444 141.124799967 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0555555556 23.380412469 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.833333333333 0.674092028746 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.21349557522 96% => OK
Readability: 47.7563865805 51.4728631049 93% => OK
Elegance: 1.4380952381 1.64882698954 87% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276262800045 0.391690518653 71% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0678943102901 0.123202303941 55% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.058372323837 0.077325440228 75% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.476042121886 0.547984918172 87% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.132296641374 0.149214159877 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106750430826 0.161403998019 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537747702457 0.0892212321368 60% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.400612351356 0.385218514788 104% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0650380832416 0.0692045440612 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196038733515 0.275328986314 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.074070944953 0.0653680567796 113% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.4325221239 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.30420353982 132% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88274336283 82% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 7.22455752212 83% => OK
Negative topic words: 6.0 3.66592920354 164% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.70907079646 74% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 13.5995575221 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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