You have recently moved to a different house.
Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter
explain why you have moved
describe the new house
invite your friend to come and visit
Dear Jose,
I am writing this letter in order to let you know, that I have moved to a new apartment in Rose Bay. As you know months ago I applied for a loan to buy this apartment and last week was approved. It was so exciting moment, sorry for tell you until now.
Well mate the apartment is huge, has three rooms and four bathrooms one for each room. Also, it has a big kitchen, dinning room, a big balcony with a fantastic water view, in where I am thinking to put all my gym equipment to do exercise with. The complex has green areas, furthermore, has pool, and big parking, actually I can use three parking spaces.
I do not want say good bye, before invite you to my open house that will be next 21 of July. I know that maybe you could be on holydays but, you know that you are welcome any time.
I hope meet you soon.
Regards.
Frank
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... know that you are welcome any time. I hope meet you soon. Regards. Fran...
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'also', 'but', 'furthermore', 'may', 'so', 'well', 'you know']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.216931216931 0.220444632235 98% => OK
Verbs: 0.179894179894 0.167888034529 107% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0687830687831 0.0606518309736 113% => OK
Adverbs: 0.037037037037 0.0506257000042 73% => OK
Pronouns: 0.10582010582 0.118615021944 89% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0952380952381 0.107062808482 89% => OK
Participles: 0.031746031746 0.041066498444 77% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.13114557243 2.54303337028 84% => OK
Infinitives: 0.031746031746 0.0385302599488 82% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00132118243153 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0634920634921 0.0714148451538 89% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.015873015873 0.0191574576366 83% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.010582010582 0.00930345855455 114% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 855.0 1141.60824742 75% => OK
No of words: 165.0 206.134020619 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18181818182 5.53046319177 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.78085437643 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.181818181818 0.284621296913 64% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.151515151515 0.211203875043 72% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.0969696969697 0.133321485273 73% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0484848484848 0.0843313296314 57% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.13114557243 2.54303337028 84% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.69696969697 0.622163163488 112% => OK
Word variations: 74.7391846912 62.8969750728 119% => OK
How many sentences: 11.0 12.9587628866 85% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.4300151701 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2312698097 44.7399317507 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.7272727273 90.9928171075 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 16.4300151701 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.727272727273 0.613754768223 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.09278350515 48% => OK
Readability: 30.1515151515 37.5504026743 80% => OK
Elegance: 1.06557377049 1.13073093955 94% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263116877767 0.331212695627 79% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0849472149567 0.0927372745006 92% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0676320488842 0.0736520305886 92% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.642580072896 0.579516596996 111% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.155874194731 0.180689518051 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0866818896405 0.122183219658 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0805708003071 0.0765303033291 105% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.0978079152825 0.211926503985 46% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0514735952532 0.0737400523855 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147057848869 0.203819188451 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0720608575082 0.067151250289 107% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.45360824742 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.48453608247 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.0206185567 75% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 4.73195876289 148% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 1.03092783505 97% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.56701030928 39% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 8.32989690722 108% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.