People behave differently when they wear different clothes. Do you agree or disagree?
Appearance is a very important aspect of a person and reflects one's personalities. As a matter of fact, it is very common for people to judge a person by external appearance because it is easy, direct and instinctive. Bearing this fact in mind a question that is a matter of debate a controversial one is whether different types of clothes greatly effects people's behavior. Agreement is yet to be reached on this issue; however, to the extent that my personal perspective is concerned, there are different style of clothes that are specified for especial places and people have to behave differently when they wear those clothes. In the following paragraph, I will pinpoint the most outstanding reasons.
One compelling reason, lending credence to the stance taken above is that clothes are made in different forms and shapes with variety of colors. Scientifically speaking, we all know that every color represent unique meaning. For example, red represent energy or blue shows calmness which can greatly influence people behavior. Indeed, vast majorities of clothes such as jeans, shirt or even sneakers are made with different colors that are restricted to specific place. When people wear these kinds of clothes in public, we can reach to the conclusion that people who put on these clothes have different characters. Delving further into the issue reveal that there is a correlation between people's trait and the colors of clothes they wear in a place. In other word, design of clothes with different color are made for especial occasion. A noteworthy refreshingly intelligible statistic revealed by recent social research conducted in our country show that a plethora of people wear their clothes with different colors according to the place where they participate. For instance, many people wear black suit in funeral because they want to express their sadness feeling.
Another reason that is equally important if not more is that there are different style of clothes which are popular among people. Broadly speaking, style of clothing are the symbol of personality. For example, a man who wear suit at work may be disciplined person or a girl who dress down may be a lively person. To put it in other word, it is established beyond doubt that people should behave maturely in every places and they need to wear especial style of clothing that impact their personalities. However, what I alluded to above cannot be overgeneralized to all contexts. Alongside with the innumerable benefits it has, indisputably, in today's hectic world, all types of clothes are designed with the same purpose. Indeed, hardly can style and color of clothes influence people's behavior because we should consider personalities and behavior through internal characteristics, which distinctive people's behavior from each other. Nevertheless, it does not make those preceding benefits pale.
To wrap it up, nowadays, clothes are designed in a way that can greatly impact people's behavior. Contemplating all the aforementioned reason one soon realize that colors show specific meaning and every colors can determine various characteristics. In addition, different clothes with different style are specified for different places which represent people's behavior.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 64, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...portant aspect of a person and reflects ones personalities. As a matter of fact, it ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['however', 'if', 'may', 'nevertheless', 'so', 'broadly speaking', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in addition', 'such as', 'as a matter of fact']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.24823943662 0.229887763892 108% => OK
Verbs: 0.161971830986 0.158761421928 102% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0880281690141 0.0866891130778 102% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0616197183099 0.046263068375 133% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0387323943662 0.0685040099705 57% => OK
Prepositions: 0.128521126761 0.118717715034 108% => OK
Participles: 0.044014084507 0.0351676179071 125% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.89703922498 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0246478873239 0.0309702414327 80% => OK
Particles: 0.00352112676056 0.00188951952338 186% => OK
Determiners: 0.0721830985915 0.0887237588012 81% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0193661971831 0.0209618222197 92% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0281690140845 0.0139019557991 203% => Maybe 'Which' is overused. If other WH_determiners like 'Who, What, Whom, Whose...' are used too in sentences, then there are no issues.
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3252.0 2387.08602151 136% => OK
No of words: 515.0 408.028673835 126% => OK
Chars per words: 6.3145631068 5.86048508987 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.763781212 4.48200974243 106% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.429126213592 0.338922669872 127% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.322330097087 0.251872472559 128% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.215533980583 0.174417080927 124% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.143689320388 0.112833075102 127% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89703922498 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 247.0 212.727598566 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.479611650485 0.524397521467 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 56.1272956331 59.2087087015 95% => OK
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6684587814 121% => OK
Sentence length: 20.6 20.5533526081 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7453676235 48.84282405 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.08 120.699889404 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6 20.5533526081 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.44 0.644075263715 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 52.8330097087 45.7405998639 116% => OK
Elegance: 1.60402684564 1.45489161554 110% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190691256893 0.300154397459 64% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0793149200672 0.103427244359 77% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.07166519339 0.0752933317313 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.421656019924 0.497263757937 85% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.141166808225 0.151897553556 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0660253665174 0.114077575197 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0626462362794 0.0781384742642 80% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.413489825352 0.336927656856 123% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0488772351107 0.067059652881 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135924569769 0.210909579961 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0492129352321 0.0618886996521 80% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8870967742 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.86379928315 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.91756272401 183% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 11.0 8.42114695341 131% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.4623655914 162% => OK
Neutral topic words: 7.0 2.75985663082 254% => OK
Total topic words: 22.0 13.6433691756 161% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.