City living in the 21st century is stressful and offers no advantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It is generally argued that living in a city means leading an agitating life where everyone oftentimes is extremely busy. Then again, modern cities never lack the variety of oppprtunities that might suit any lifestyle. Thus supporting better welfare than might living in the countryside do which in turn makes me maintain that urban living perks outweigh its drawbacks.
When it comes to shopping, city inhabitants have the virtue of large luxurious shopping centres that supply whatever one needs in a single well designed place. Additionally a city accomedates a wide selection of reatil from high end very expensive yet famous brands to ones that are easy on the pocket, granting a choice for people of different finicial circumstances.
In terms of archeticture, cities often amaze you with skilfully built skyscrapers, stadiums and hotels. Small towns might offer the advantage of being surrounded by plenty of greenery; however in cities you will be fascinated by what the human kind is able of constructing.
At the same time, cities are known to be very crowded and noisy considering that they sustain a very large population, but in my opinion struggling to find a parking lot for your car is hardly a problem when you look at the virtue of modern city life. In any case you can always use the often considerably well managed public transport system serving your city.
To sum up, I consider city living to be easier, more amusing and always offering new experiences which in my view makes rural lifestyle quite boring.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 161, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Additionally,
... needs in a single well designed place. Additionally a city accomedates a wide selection of ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'then', 'thus', 'well', 'in any case', 'in my opinion', 'in my view', 'to sum up']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.229090909091 0.247107183377 93% => OK
Verbs: 0.174545454545 0.155533422707 112% => OK
Adjectives: 0.109090909091 0.0946595960268 115% => OK
Adverbs: 0.08 0.0501214627716 160% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0509090909091 0.0437548338989 116% => OK
Prepositions: 0.112727272727 0.122226691241 92% => OK
Participles: 0.0618181818182 0.0403226058552 153% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.74890492334 2.80594681477 98% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0218181818182 0.0326793684256 67% => OK
Particles: 0.00363636363636 0.00163938923432 222% => OK
Determiners: 0.0727272727273 0.0861772015684 84% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0181818181818 0.021408717616 85% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0363636363636 0.011925033212 305% => Maybe 'Which' is overused. If other WH_determiners like 'Who, What, Whom, Whose...' are used too in sentences, then there are no issues.
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1542.0 1933.35771543 80% => OK
No of words: 255.0 316.048096192 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.04705882353 6.12580529183 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20517956788 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.352941176471 0.374742101984 94% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.239215686275 0.28420135186 84% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.172549019608 0.203846283523 85% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.129411764706 0.137316102897 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74890492334 2.80594681477 98% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.037074148 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.678431372549 0.56093040696 121% => OK
Word variations: 81.8832549167 60.7387585426 135% => OK
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0891783567 62% => OK
Sentence length: 25.5 20.7743622355 123% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2546213907 49.517814964 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.2 127.492653851 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 20.7743622355 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.1 0.814263465372 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.99599198397 25% => OK
Readability: 49.4215686275 49.1944974215 100% => OK
Elegance: 1.32142857143 1.69124875643 78% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254516857262 0.332605444948 77% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0718660172662 0.102741220458 70% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0326581371426 0.0668466124924 49% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.667822854833 0.534860350844 125% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.16599083033 0.148594505496 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108089901538 0.134430193775 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0371564132436 0.0742795772207 50% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.164357830313 0.324371583561 51% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0245329296493 0.0638462369009 38% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145602416886 0.228012699653 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0282797508061 0.058150111329 49% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.68436873747 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.41683366733 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 8.0 5.90881763527 135% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.5751503006 78% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 10.0 10.4468937876 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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