Shopping is dangerous because it makes people selfish and careless with money. Do you agree or disagree?
Shopping behavior of people has changed since the introduction of contemporary era. However, some people consider it disadvantageous as they believe it is waste of money. Both the outlooks will be critiqued before reaching a reasoned conclusion.
Some people opine that shopping is an activity which makes people spendthrift. As we can see, Many thing are being bought daily, most of which are useless. So, It could be better to spend same money on other essential things like education, business and savings so that future can be made bright and secure as it is truly said that “A penny saved is a penny earned”. Hence, it is not wise to spend money on trivial activity, called shopping.
Moreover, a person who starts to do shopping become addicted to it. Most of the youngsters are indulged in this activity and they demand for more and more money from their parents. It gives birth to a sense of selfishness. In many cases, large amount loans and debts are being taken by people to satisfy their thirst of shopping. Ultimately, People get crushed under the burden of debt and take wrong steps. Many suicides are committed by people, nowadays, just because they are unable to repay the money which they had taken in the form of a loan.
On the other hand, some people assert that shopping has become essential part of their life. In these days of modern era, there are many professions in which people have to keep themselves up-to-date to compete with each other. In addition, social status is given to every person according to amount of shopping he does. So, it is need of hour.
In a nutshell, after discussing both the aspects I come to conclusion that pros of shopping are outweighed by its cons. We should not be too much inclined towards it as it is true that “Cut your coat according to cloth”.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 95, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun thing seems to be countable; consider using: 'Many things'.
Suggestion: Many things
...akes people spendthrift. As we can see, Many thing are being bought daily, most of which a...
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Discourse Markers used:
['hence', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'moreover', 'so', 'in addition', 'in many cases', 'it is true', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.213698630137 0.247107183377 86% => OK
Verbs: 0.2 0.155533422707 129% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0876712328767 0.0946595960268 93% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0356164383562 0.0501214627716 71% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0657534246575 0.0437548338989 150% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.123287671233 0.122226691241 101% => OK
Participles: 0.0657534246575 0.0403226058552 163% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.58685850357 2.80594681477 92% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0356164383562 0.0326793684256 109% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0657534246575 0.0861772015684 76% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.013698630137 0.021408717616 64% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.013698630137 0.011925033212 115% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1831.0 1933.35771543 95% => OK
No of words: 317.0 316.048096192 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.77602523659 6.12580529183 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20517956788 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.321766561514 0.374742101984 86% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.201892744479 0.28420135186 71% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.16403785489 0.203846283523 80% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0977917981073 0.137316102897 71% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58685850357 2.80594681477 92% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.037074148 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580441640379 0.56093040696 103% => OK
Word variations: 63.8049308991 60.7387585426 105% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0891783567 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.6842105263 20.7743622355 80% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.6499821972 49.517814964 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.3684210526 127.492653851 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6842105263 20.7743622355 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.526315789474 0.814263465372 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.99599198397 25% => OK
Readability: 36.8734849743 49.1944974215 75% => OK
Elegance: 1.33636363636 1.69124875643 79% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214695463228 0.332605444948 65% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0668617395589 0.102741220458 65% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0505730958254 0.0668466124924 76% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.491896936576 0.534860350844 92% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.134612870082 0.148594505496 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0849837954165 0.134430193775 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0534773377799 0.0742795772207 72% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.27075414171 0.324371583561 83% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0737145694965 0.0638462369009 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135959807919 0.228012699653 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0438672375783 0.058150111329 75% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.68436873747 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.41683366733 205% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 4.0 5.90881763527 68% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.5751503006 155% => OK
Neutral topic words: 7.0 1.9629258517 357% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 10.4468937876 144% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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