The well being of society is enhanced when many of its people questions Authority.
Involvement of citizen into Authoritarian Services definitely results into betterment of Society. Social problem are there in every society and to manage those problems and improve present services should be the motto of the Authority. Authorities are responsible for the solutions of these problems but, without proper feedback a powerful Authority might seem handicapped.
Authoritarian work can be managed by collecting periodic feedback from there citizens and applying the same in maintenance and management of the society thus results into betterment. When people are allowed to give there opinions on decisions taken by authority, they sometimes give a positive, revolutionary, original ideas which becomes beneficial for future work and application. Take an example of the region Nebraska and its government- Nebraskan government was pluming for several years until their citizens are allowed to point out governmental breaches and give their opinions on improving current conditions. This change became an revolutionary decision as this actually improved Nebraska's economical conditions and hence results into improvisation.
Some corrupt or greedish leaders might try to take advantage of governmental allowances and thus depriving social process. These greed-lovers cannot be stopped until someone stands up and questions the authority "What's going on?". By successfully protesting or threatening these fake faces, social causes can be solved. Obviously, such work should be identified and take care of the frauds. This is possible by involvement of people outside the Authority and cannot be helped by someone inside the Authority. Thus there should be transparency between citizens and Authority.
It is not only the problem of Authority but, people whose freedom depends upon them. They of-course have the right to modify or change certain rules and regulations which might indirectly reflect people's lifestyle and comfort. Thus not allowing these citizens to interrupt the official procedures might result into Authoritarian power which could be fatal.
- The well being of society is enhanced when many of its people questions Authority. 58
- Primary goal of education is to get a job 83
- Comparison between Prancer and Acer car. 50
- All nations should help support the development of a global university designed to engage students in the process of solving the world's most persistent social problems. 79
- CLAIM The importance of multidisciplinary education is overrated in todays times REASON Education should be focused on preparation for a specific career path and thus students should be encouraged to only pursue a single area of study 63
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 638, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... current conditions. This change became an revolutionary decision as this actually...
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Line 3, column 700, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
...ion as this actually improved Nebraskas economical conditions and hence results into impro...
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Line 5, column 219, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: What's
...ds up and questions the authority 'Whats going on?'. By successfully protes...
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Line 5, column 520, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...helped by someone inside the Authority. Thus there should be transparency between ci...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
... reflect peoples lifestyle and comfort. Thus not allowing these citizens to interrup...
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'but', 'hence', 'if', 'so', 'thus']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.252225519288 0.240241500013 105% => OK
Verbs: 0.169139465875 0.157235817809 108% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0949554896142 0.0880659088768 108% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0474777448071 0.0497285424764 95% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0207715133531 0.0444667217837 47% => OK
Prepositions: 0.109792284866 0.12292977631 89% => OK
Participles: 0.0563798219585 0.0406280797675 139% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.99956101778 2.79330140395 107% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0178041543027 0.030933414821 58% => OK
Particles: 0.00593471810089 0.0016655270985 356% => OK
Determiners: 0.080118694362 0.0997080785238 80% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0356083086053 0.0249443105267 143% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0148367952522 0.0148568991511 100% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2083.0 2732.02544248 76% => OK
No of words: 305.0 452.878318584 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.82950819672 6.0361032391 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.58838876751 91% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.481967213115 0.366273622748 132% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.396721311475 0.280924506359 141% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.288524590164 0.200843997647 144% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.196721311475 0.132149295362 149% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99956101778 2.79330140395 107% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 219.290929204 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590163934426 0.48968727796 121% => OK
Word variations: 64.8673538256 55.4138127331 117% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6194690265 78% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0625 23.380412469 82% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5599578518 59.4972553346 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.1875 141.124799967 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0625 23.380412469 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.375 0.674092028746 56% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.21349557522 96% => OK
Readability: 58.7346311475 51.4728631049 114% => OK
Elegance: 1.7625 1.64882698954 107% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274577266019 0.391690518653 70% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.088941424637 0.123202303941 72% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0564202475963 0.077325440228 73% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.505979520517 0.547984918172 92% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0916267077273 0.149214159877 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10926536005 0.161403998019 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0766504871727 0.0892212321368 86% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.298429262329 0.385218514788 77% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.00829345729973 0.0692045440612 12% => Paragraphs are so close to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19331360391 0.275328986314 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0439468493418 0.0653680567796 67% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.4325221239 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.30420353982 113% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88274336283 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 6.0 7.22455752212 83% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 3.66592920354 136% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.70907079646 37% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 13.5995575221 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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