People's behavior is largely determined by forces not of their own making.
The influence of forces on an individual’s behaviour has been a matter of discussion since a long time. On one hand, there is a strong belief on "Karma" creating circumstances and affecting people's belief and behaviour, and on the other hand, there is a growing evidence of how social, political, economic, or even biological factors elicit behavioral response of a specific kind. My innate belief, however, persuades me to believe that people's behaviour is largely determined by forces not of their own making.
One pertinent example of the same is Syrians who are witnessing the hodgepodge of war since a long time now and are coaxed to behave in a certain way. Most of them are fleeing their country to escape the devastation of bombs and missiles and ruthless regime. It can be said that this specific behaviour to seek a safe is an output of not something which the individuals are directly responsible for. It is largely determined by the country's past and present times.
In fact, the example of Syrians falls perfectly in line with how political, cultural, social and economic factors shape the behaviour of a society. Kids born in poor and homeless families, often resort to begging following the other members of their family. Descendants of communities who have been in rivalry since a long time see the other communities as enemies. Social evils like the caste system, still practised widely in India, which deprives the specific communities to not be a part of the larger society is forced upon the new-comers of the caste afflicted societies and gets them to behave in a specific way. The fact that Indians cannot visit Pakistan easily or vice-versa is determined by the long standing political tensions between the two countries and is no way a making of an individual's action. People in a country like North Korea do not speak anything against the regime, not because they don't want to, but because of the intolerance of the ruling party.
A lot of aspects in our life is a making of what prevails outside our realm of individual control. Though this idea may not hold true for every situation, it leaves a mark on how the individuals and the larger communities generally act or react.
- People's behavior is largely determined by forces not of their own making. 50
- 49. Claim: We can usually learn much more from people whose views we share than from those whose views contradict our own.Reason: Disagreement can cause stress and inhibit learning.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or dis 16
- Governments should offer a free university education to any student who has been admitted to a university but who cannot afford the tuition 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 602, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a specific way" with adverb for "specific"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...icted societies and gets them to behave in a specific way. The fact that Indians cannot visit Pak...
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Line 4, column 795, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
... countries and is no way a making of an individuals action. People in a country like North ...
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Line 4, column 911, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ng against the regime, not because they dont want to, but because of the intolerance...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'still', 'in fact', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.248210023866 0.240241500013 103% => OK
Verbs: 0.143198090692 0.157235817809 91% => OK
Adjectives: 0.090692124105 0.0880659088768 103% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0453460620525 0.0497285424764 91% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0310262529833 0.0444667217837 70% => OK
Prepositions: 0.138424821002 0.12292977631 113% => OK
Participles: 0.0405727923628 0.0406280797675 100% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.85431201917 2.79330140395 102% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0190930787589 0.030933414821 62% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.114558472554 0.0997080785238 115% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00715990453461 0.0249443105267 29% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.0190930787589 0.0148568991511 129% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2223.0 2732.02544248 81% => OK
No of words: 376.0 452.878318584 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.91223404255 6.0361032391 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.58838876751 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.372340425532 0.366273622748 102% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.287234042553 0.280924506359 102% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.191489361702 0.200843997647 95% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.130319148936 0.132149295362 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85431201917 2.79330140395 102% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 219.290929204 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553191489362 0.48968727796 113% => OK
Word variations: 62.3045903087 55.4138127331 112% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6194690265 73% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0666666667 23.380412469 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.9625217919 59.4972553346 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.2 141.124799967 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0666666667 23.380412469 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.533333333333 0.674092028746 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.21349557522 58% => OK
Readability: 53.790070922 51.4728631049 105% => OK
Elegance: 1.94565217391 1.64882698954 118% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274233994982 0.391690518653 70% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0977611937393 0.123202303941 79% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0525601428789 0.077325440228 68% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.575314779786 0.547984918172 105% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.105864181564 0.149214159877 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126130601112 0.161403998019 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0980416293589 0.0892212321368 110% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.397053948003 0.385218514788 103% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0843525977866 0.0692045440612 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198481166562 0.275328986314 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0762619101946 0.0653680567796 117% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.4325221239 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.30420353982 132% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88274336283 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 4.0 7.22455752212 55% => OK
Negative topic words: 6.0 3.66592920354 164% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.70907079646 37% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 13.5995575221 81% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.