All nations should help support the development of a global university designed to engage students in the process of solving the world's most persistent social problems.
It is true that these days there are more and more social problems and the problems related to law and order, which cannot be solved by one nation. To solve these problems all nations have to work together and there has to be complete communication between them. Therefore, the idea of having a global university that will engage students in solving the most persistent problems of the world is a good idea.
Many problems actually bother every country over the world, and require international communication and cooperation to solve them. Society and technology has developed so much that every country depends on other countries for its economy, culture, and environment. Problems like global warming, environmental pollution, energy crisis, terrorism threat are troubling people all over the world. Any one country cannot solve these problems on its own. Each country has to take respective responsibility. International cooperation is an effective way to handle international problems. The conflicts between different religions have caused many bloody events. If a global university is built then it will have students from all over the world and from all the religions. This will be good for the understanding between different cultures, societies, and religions.
It will be good to unite the strengths and forces of many nations to attack the world's persistent problems. For example, many criminal problems like drug trafficking, pirates and smuggling often involves criminals of different countries. Hence, it needs cooperation between countries in attacking the global crimes. Students who will graduate from this global university will have more knowledge of other countries. It will help them to solve many persistent problems. The students from different countries would be able to discuss some commonly concerned problem, and exchange their viewpoints and thoughts.
However, building and running such a university would not be that easy. There are also some problems that cannot be ignored and need international endeavor to overcome them. Each country has different national and cultural interests and there will definitely be conflicts in handling them. However, students have to learn to cooperate and communicate in the best way to solve the conflicts. They have to keep their focus on the ultimate goal of solving global problems.
There are many examples when people from different countries have worked together to solve different problems. For example, the Kyoto Protocol to carbon dioxide emission problem, or the Green Peace Organization for environment and then we have WHO for health problems in the world. All these examples explain that international communication and cooperation is the only way to solve global problems. Hence a global university will prepare the youth to handle the problems of future. It will help them to understand the persistence and complexity of today's social problems, and could impel them to find solutions that are more appropriate.
Hence, to build a global university to solve world's problems is a suggestion of great value. The students of this university will get the power and opportunities they need to help solve the world's problems. Hence, it should be supported by all nations.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 401, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'also', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'then', 'therefore', 'as to', 'for example', 'it is true']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.241563055062 0.240241500013 101% => OK
Verbs: 0.163410301954 0.157235817809 104% => OK
Adjectives: 0.106571936057 0.0880659088768 121% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0390763765542 0.0497285424764 79% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0373001776199 0.0444667217837 84% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0799289520426 0.12292977631 65% => OK
Participles: 0.0319715808171 0.0406280797675 79% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.87234540502 2.79330140395 103% => OK
Infinitives: 0.044404973357 0.030933414821 144% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0941385435169 0.0997080785238 94% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0319715808171 0.0249443105267 128% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0106571936057 0.0148568991511 72% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3263.0 2732.02544248 119% => OK
No of words: 508.0 452.878318584 112% => OK
Chars per words: 6.42322834646 6.0361032391 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.74751043592 4.58838876751 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.407480314961 0.366273622748 111% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.320866141732 0.280924506359 114% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.263779527559 0.200843997647 131% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.169291338583 0.132149295362 128% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87234540502 2.79330140395 103% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 219.290929204 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.423228346457 0.48968727796 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 48.1946121986 55.4138127331 87% => OK
How many sentences: 31.0 20.6194690265 150% => OK
Sentence length: 16.3870967742 23.380412469 70% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.6837914884 59.4972553346 53% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.258064516 141.124799967 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3870967742 23.380412469 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.354838709677 0.674092028746 53% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.94800884956 121% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.21349557522 19% => OK
Readability: 48.4737109474 51.4728631049 94% => OK
Elegance: 1.47407407407 1.64882698954 89% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.425393502011 0.391690518653 109% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0991617310106 0.123202303941 80% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0645023386803 0.077325440228 83% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.461109091847 0.547984918172 84% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.128128470693 0.149214159877 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.154966511887 0.161403998019 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.121131439516 0.0892212321368 136% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.432567391559 0.385218514788 112% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0300545580677 0.0692045440612 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.316915369303 0.275328986314 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0721861050917 0.0653680567796 110% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.4325221239 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 16.0 5.30420353982 302% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88274336283 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 7.22455752212 138% => OK
Negative topic words: 16.0 3.66592920354 436% => Less negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.70907079646 111% => OK
Total topic words: 29.0 13.5995575221 213% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 79.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.75 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.