as countries develop, their population tend to live individually small family. In your opinion what is cause and what are effect on society. Is it a positive or negative development?
some people think that the existence of nuclear family is conducive to economic development of a country while others prefer the old-fashioned way of living in a big family. my essay will discuss causes and effect of small-sized families.
To begin with, there are a variety of reasons in support of nuclear families. Firstly, being a bread-winner in a big family, husbands or wives feel stressed and strained, consequently, they tend to look for an outlet to live where they have to shoulder less economic responsibilities. Secondly, with the ubiquity of Western culture, young people are imbued with the idea of individualism instead of collectivism. for this reason, a smaller unit of family is preferable. In addition, due to the fact that the global population has become escalated with an increasing birth rate, there are less land available to afford big families. As a result, it is inevitable that people begin to detach each other to find a place of living on their own.
When it comes to effects of this trend, it is true that family members can lead an open life with more space of their own. Obviously, those who used to be imposed by the decisions of older generations, now can be liberated to live with whom they love and follow a career they adore. besides, only once they are no longer stuck with big families do they nurture their independence and learn how to stand on their feet economically and emotionally. However the cons of this issue are seen. due to living on their own away from big community, people are likely to become self-centred and disconnected, followed by a sense of isolation. Without the guidance of old generation, little do the young attack importance to traditional values and appreciate the past. consequently, they might assimilate into other cultures at the expense of their own cultural identity or even being lured into social vice.
In conclusion, with the blending with different cultures in the world, people prefer living in small unit of family to large one. this trend can result in both benefits and drawbacks for individuals and society. Nevertheless, i believe that its advantages surpass its disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, look, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, while, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 41.998997996 152% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1807.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 366.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93715846995 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80789918429 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57650273224 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 585.0 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7045513743 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.388888889 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.27777777778 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145417383509 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0421956182548 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0392568239166 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102234791208 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0521852322941 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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