The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps illustrates the result of tourism facilities construction on an island in the middle of a sea compared to the condition before construction.

Prior to the construction, there were nothing on the island but a beach and some palm trees. The beach is located on the west side on the island, and palm trees are found approximately at 30 and 200 metres away from beach.

The development has changed the island dramatically in every parts of it. The beach is made to be a swimming area, and given a footpath to the accommodation lodges around the palm trees. The footpath is connected to the vehicle track on the middle of island, which surrounds receptionist building, and makes path to the restaurant on the north side and pier on the south side. On the further east side of vehicle track, there is another a complex of accommodation lodges connected with footpath, however, it does not connect to the central vehicle track. The lodges are located just on the left side of the palm tree forest.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'illustrate'.
Suggestion: illustrate
The maps illustrates the result of tourism facilities constr...
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Line 5, column 75, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...land dramatically in every parts of it. The beach is made to be a swimming area, an...
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Line 5, column 188, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...mmodation lodges around the palm trees. The footpath is connected to the vehicle tr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 833.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 175.0 196.424390244 89% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78829038396 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542857142857 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 251.1 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5404219537 43.030603864 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.125 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.875 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 5.23603664747 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0931581074966 0.215688989381 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0457800585364 0.103423049105 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0534425858011 0.0843802449381 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0861858514356 0.15604864568 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0593013217752 0.0819641961636 72% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.2329268293 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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