Regarding to the methodology of study, some people suggest that students should in groups; whereas, others propose that students ought to study alone. This eaasy will cosider merits of each approach and settle with conclusion from the writer.
To begin with, studying in groups enables students to share opinions on same question and acquire disparate avenues to solve problems. When study with others, students has the chance to hear different ideas toward same question and listen to other students talking about the approach used in solving questions. In the process of hearing and listening, students acknowledge different methods in talking question. Therefore, students acquire far more knowledge than studying alone. As a matter of fact, schools and teachers encourage students to discuss question in group for the purpose of providing the opportunity of sharing and receiving different ways to answer a question. For instance, students are frequently offered the chance to talk in groups during literature class.
However, studying alone offers a quiet environment without disturbance form others. Concentration on study necessitates a trainquill occasion when nobody disturb a bookworm indulging in his own world. when people study alone, they are free from distruction. Furthermore, studying alone is the most common pattern in people ' s life. People only have the chance to study in groups when they are young and in school. After all, people spend the majority time studying alone. Actually, people do not have the chance to study in groups after graduating from high school. Thus, people have to adapt and form the habit of study alone, because people study alone most of their lifetime.
To recapitulate, both studying in group and studying alone have merits. However, the writer prefers the latter approach due to its advantage out weight the first approach.
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...tates a trainquill occasion when nobody disturb a bookworm indulging in his own world. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, furthermore, however, if, regarding, so, therefore, thus, whereas, after all, as to, for instance, talking about, as a matter of fact, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1588.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40136054422 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60153167399 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554421768707 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.384769539078 520% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9816801194 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.2222222222 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3333333333 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.16666666667 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287753106963 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102192022935 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0668073763326 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172891279482 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0579759731546 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.74 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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