You are going to open a deposit account in a bank near to your workplace. Write a letter to the manager of the bank, introduce yourself and ask him/ her to send you the required information.
Dear Sir/ Madam;
I am writing this letter with regard to your website when I was surfing the internet to find some banks in my neighborhood. It seems that your bank provides good services for customers as you claim.
I am a manager at a trading company in your vicinity. Our company imports the raw materials for the dairy industry from Europe and distributes them among domestic producers that are highly profitable for us.
Now, I have decided to open a deposit account at a bank with the best services and for me, the highest rate of interest is so prominent. Moreover, I like to use a loan with the lowest interest in near future.
Would you please send me the whole information about a variety of deposit accounts and also the terms and conditions for opening each kind of that such as fee charge, required documents, etc.
I appreciate your devoting time to my letter and I am waiting for your early reply.
Faithfully yours,
John Smith
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir/ Madam; I am writing this letter with regard to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, moreover, so, kind of, such as, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 796.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 168.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7380952381 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55514575734 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.672619047619 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 246.6 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.826016474 44.8134815571 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.4444444444 76.5299724578 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 4.34317383033 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252702186548 0.216113520407 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0909221768151 0.0766984524023 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0647032772654 0.0603063233224 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127054340318 0.12726935374 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0629027687515 0.0580467560999 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 8.71597938144 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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