the internet has as many disadvantages as it does advantages to what extent do you agree with this statement

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the internet has as many disadvantages as it does advantages. to what extent do you agree with this statement?

Over the last few years, remarkable advances have been made computer technology, especially in the field of the internet. Naturally, the internet as a practical tool has both advantages and disadvantage; however I believe that its benefits outweigh drawback.
many people believe that the internet plays a crucial role in today's world to such an extent that they can not imagine their life without that. They have many logical reasons to support their idea. These people say that the internet makes our life easier, for example, it provides quite a wide range of useful communication means such as social networks like Tweeter and Telegram, Facebook, chat-rooms and so on. As well as this, the internet is an effective way to promote our public and professional knowledge because there is a huge volume of data and information on the internet.
On the other hand, those people who oppose the widespread use of the internet worry about its negative effects on human life. they claim that using internet result in many health problems that severely damage to human's body both physically and mentally. Scientific researches demonstrate that there is a direct correlation between the number of hours that people spend their time on using the internet and the rate of depression disease. Moreover, too much using the internet decrease people's physical activity and it may lead to obesity, which is one of most common people's disease all over the world.
To sum up, Although the internet has many outstanding advantages that make our life so much easier, we should be taken some actions to reduce its negative effect on our life.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Many
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...out its negative effects on human life. they claim that using internet result in man...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, moreover, so, well, for example, such as, as well as, to sum up, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalization wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1360.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05576208178 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59311201124 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617100371747 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.294986666 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.636363636 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4545454545 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.09090909091 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132549850132 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0553326456564 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0279736239851 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0780676778203 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0303853709101 0.056905535591 53% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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