Some people believe that museums should represent the cultures and civilizations of all nations while some others believe museums should introduce the culture and civilization of their own country. Which side do you agree with? Express your reasons.
These days tourism is known as one of the developmental indicators for countries and the museums can play a prominent role to attract tourists. Many people believe that museums should indicate the culture and civilization of their own country while the others think that they should introduce the cultures of all nations. I advocate with latter group for two reasons which are discussed below.
The first group has an opinion that it may be so costly to build and equip such a huge museums. Of course, the idea of the first group may be right to some extent, I believe that having such museums is so useful for people who do not afford to travel abroad and it can be a tourist attraction individually.
Firstly, traveling to various countries need to have a specific budget that it is not affordable for some people. So these type of museums can be very helpful for these people. They can pay a few charge to entrance the museums and then can enjoy of visiting various cultures in the countries all around the world. Actually, they pay for an inexpensive ticket to travel several countries.
In addition, having such museums is kind of investment in the tourism industry and they can play a role as a tourist attraction and have some revenues for the government.
To sum up, although many people believe that the museums should represent their own culture, I am of the conception that the museums with a diversity of cultures have some advantages and governments can invest on this issue to improve their income.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 7, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'days'' or 'day's'?
Suggestion: days'; day's
These days tourism is known as one of the developm...
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Line 2, column 88, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'museum'?
Suggestion: museum
...o costly to build and equip such a huge museums. Of course, the idea of the first group...
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Line 3, column 192, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun charge seems to be countable; consider using: 'few charges'.
Suggestion: few charges
...elpful for these people. They can pay a few charge to entrance the museums and then can en...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, firstly, if, may, so, then, while, in addition, kind of, of course, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1256.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77566539924 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59488919916 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501901140684 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 389.7 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.8286154108 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.181818182 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9090909091 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.54545454545 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310469751568 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119524127774 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.148689386442 0.0667982634062 223% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185271473789 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.124393524164 0.056905535591 219% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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