Some people say that self employment is better than a job in a company or an institution.
Nowadays, people doing jobs in different way like profession, self-employed etc. All, such as self employment and job they have own advantages and disadvantages.
So, self employment in people have a lot of freedom. They have no limited boundary such as time. But, in the business they have face more problems. Many time their products or supply of goods not proper than they can not achieved profit.
However, some people think job is better. They havr fix income in job. But, they are built in certain rules and regulations. Many time in job they have sacrificing their holiday for, overburden of work. While, in recession time employee not face out the salary problems because their salary is fix.
Self employment and job both are two side of a coin. They have run by certain their rules and regulations. All, people can't success in business because in that require own ability, mind etc. In job our salary fix than we are relax and tension free. In job we can not take their decision and not doing implementation in any area. We do not worried about market fluctuation up or down and other benefit is we are tress less. Another, we can easily change our job any time.
To sum up, good discussion of both opinion but job offer safety and reduce stress. While, business giving freedom and new opportunities of growth. But, I think so job is better than self employment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 128, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'faced'.
Suggestion: faced
...as time. But, in the business they have face more problems. Many time their products...
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Line 4, column 120, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...heir rules and regulations. All, people cant success in business because in that req...
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Line 4, column 226, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'relaxed'.
Suggestion: relaxed
... etc. In job our salary fix than we are relax and tension free. In job we can not tak...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, while, i think, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1137.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 240.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7375 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55929338664 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558333333333 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 354.6 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.2975951904 54% => Sentence length is too short
Sentence length SD: 18.9199291442 49.4020404114 38% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 54.1428571429 106.682146367 51% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.4285714286 20.7667163134 55% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 7.06120827912 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254194911544 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0906728980535 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10117355163 0.0667982634062 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161603287883 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0539348082461 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 13.0946893788 50% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.77 50.2224549098 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.3001002004 57% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.03 12.4159519038 73% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.01 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 9.78957915832 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.1190380762 63% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to improve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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