some people work for the same organization all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organizations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
There is an area of disagreement among the public about whether to remain in an organization for the whole life or change the working place from time to time. The conservative attitude towards career has its own benefits; however, it might have some serious drawbacks.
From a financial standpoint, working for one company would provide economic security for employees. It is fairly unlikely that one, who has gained a long experience in a workplace, faces redundancy. Not to mention, many who climbed up the corporate ladder, had worked for a long period in one organization. Moreover, prospective employees could take advantage over long-term contracts in order to either devise a pension scheme or take an early retirement. On the other hand, working for only one firm could be monotonous and unchallenging at some stage. It is often impossible for workers to discover their hidden talents unless one is being challenged.
It is generally thought that withdrawing from a company in which you have felt settled and joining a new one is such a huge gamble on your career. Under some certain circumstances, in spite of the common belief, the taken gamble will be paid off. Having had relevant education, diligence, perseverance, sagacity and rapport, success in new working atmosphere would be highly probable. Working alongside a new team help you excel in various skills. It offers you a chance to shift your ground and hold a broader point of view.
In conclusion, considering all aspects of both ideas, it could be very tempting and convincing to work in an enterprise for the whole working life regarding its outstanding merits. However, I feel that it is worth trying to switch the job, albeit with its inherent risks. The more dynamic you are, the better you enjoy the life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 96, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'working'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'convince' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: working
...t could be very tempting and convincing to work in an enterprise for the whole working ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, regarding, so, i feel, in conclusion, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1490.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01683501684 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81946677921 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632996632997 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.6753224743 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.125 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5625 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6875 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297068597536 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0876805141083 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0755796229335 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167137722027 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.038717674526 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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