Nowadays more and more researches are being carried out and sponsored by private organizations. Do advantages outweigh the disadvantages in such cases?

Grammar and spelling errors:
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The discoveries in the field of science ...
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...id progress in different sectors. Here, i would like to assert that it has more b...
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...panies are making new additions in their products during research programs. Furth...
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...latest and exclusive designs of products are sold at higher prices to other natio...
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...ial crisis. To be specific, a hefty sum of of money is invested during the experiment...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, thus, while, as to, for instance, in addition, as a result, on the contrary, what is more

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1708.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.69333333333 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25073666865 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.937146945 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.4 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.55 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175662194083 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.038065565014 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0378257403734 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0841512319296 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0265625410075 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.33 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.13 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.96 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Hello sir check myessay please

Tell me how are my ideas,language and explaination ???

Everything is fine except this flaw:
Avg. Sentence Length: 15 21.0

because you used a lot of transition words, like:

As a result, Adding to it, To be specific,...

instead, try to use more relative clauses or adverb clauses to make sentences longer.

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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 20 15
No. of Words: 300 350
No. of Characters: 1642 1500
No. of Different Words: 183 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.162 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.473 4.6
Word Length SD: 3.133 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 137 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 110 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 89 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 61 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 15 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.173 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.7 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.244 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.486 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.013 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5