Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Only people who earn a lot of money are successful.
By and large, it is established beyond doubt that human beings put their efforts and bend over backwards to reach success in their personal life along with trials and tribulations in daily life. Stemming from this fact a relevant question that is a moot point is whether people who do not accumulate a hoard of money are not successful and money play a key role. Due to the controversial nature of this question there is not a general agreement on this issue. I am, however, to a great extent of the conviction that success has different aspect for people and individuals look for it in various ways. In the following paragraphs some convincing reason will be delineated to elaborate my personal stance.
To commence with, success is one of utmost important life goals for everyone and people make an effort to capture it in a blink of an eye. In fact, although money could facilitate every problem and overcome obstacles, it has nothing to do with fortune and is meaningless for some people. Generally phrased, a plethora of people have a substantial amount of money but they are not satisfy and happy at all. For example, sometimes donating some money to the poor people could be an undeniable success due to the fact that it contribute greatly to the reduction of poverty. To elucidate more on this issue, although money could ease every pain in life, it will not bring fortune and in some case success. As a matter of fact, as some study have shown, money could be tricky especially for teenagers who are not mature enough to make a wise decision. Indeed, this situation might increase crime rate in the society.
Another reason that should not go unnoticed is that the key to success is not waiting for it or money but seizing it. Broadly speaking, crowds of people just wait until success shine up and there is no doubt that this is like a dream. Indeed, somehow hard working attitude could provide fertile ground for people to achieve success. Going into the depth, through hard-working people could touch success owing to the fact that they know what exactly success is and do not take luck and money into consideration. Nonetheless, what was alluded to above can't be overgeneralized to all contexts. Alongside with the countless merits it has, indisputably, money could provide an opportunity for people to reach success without any difficulty. As far as I am concerned, money can overcome whole existing barriers and ease the way of success.
In light of reasons elaborated, I reiterate that achieve success has different aspects and it has different meaning for human beings. Indeed, although money could patronize people to seize success, it will not guarantee the long lasting success. Arguably, reaching success through hard-working attitude would assure people to remain success in their whole life cycle.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 381, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'satisfied'.
Suggestion: satisfied
...antial amount of money but they are not satisfy and happy at all. For example, sometime...
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Line 5, column 551, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... Nonetheless, what was alluded to above cant be overgeneralized to all contexts. Alo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, nonetheless, so, broadly speaking, for example, in fact, no doubt, as a matter of fact, by and large, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2354.0 1977.66487455 119% => OK
No of words: 478.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92468619247 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67581127817 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6476364586 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508368200837 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 739.8 618.680645161 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.3222388189 48.9658058833 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.0 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7272727273 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 5.45110844103 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148974559028 0.236089414692 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0520950452091 0.076458572812 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0405735650442 0.0737576698707 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103368651472 0.150856017488 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0300927131468 0.0645574589148 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 86.8835125448 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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