Should criminals be punished with lengthy jail terms or re-educated and rehabilitated using community service programs for instance, before being reintroduced to society?
There were old saying in Law "Thousands of criminal can be free but an innocents should not be punished".Some people say criminal should have lengthy jail sentence as per their crime. Other say they should re-educated in the rehabilitation center, So they can be better person again. In my opinion they should get their punishment according to their crime.
In contrast of my statement, Criminal are humans too, They are born by poverty, atrocity and with bad governance. If their crime are not compelling the government should be flexible with his case and they should get a chance to become bett...
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The essay is for IELTS task
The essay is for IELTS task II, not task I. You got the category wrongly.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 74, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an innocent' or simply 'innocents'?
Suggestion: an innocent; innocents
...s;Thousands of criminal can be free but an innocents should not be punished'.Some peopl...
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Line 1, column 116, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Some
... innocents should not be punished'.Some people say criminal should have lengthy...
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Line 1, column 308, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...an be better person again. In my opinion they should get their punishment accordi...
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Line 3, column 4, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: contrast,
...ishment according to their crime. In contrast of my statement, Criminal are humans to...
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Line 3, column 347, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'reintroduced'.
Suggestion: reintroduced
...mmunity service program before they are reintroduce to society.There are many examples of t...
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Line 3, column 370, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: There
... before they are reintroduce to society.There are many examples of these kind of scen...
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Line 3, column 397, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...e to society.There are many examples of these kind of scenario where people became better ...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...e people became better person again. However In the other hand, Their are some crime...
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Line 5, column 28, Rule ID: THEIR_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: There
...on again. However In the other hand, Their are some crime which have no need of fo...
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Line 5, column 84, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...rime which have no need of forgiveness. As an example of my statement the incident...
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Line 5, column 247, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...e of religion and revenge. The kids who dont know why they are being murdered. Those...
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Line 7, column 119, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: With
... because after all they are humans too. with that kind of approach the world can be ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, after all, in contrast, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 7.48453608247 227% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 4.92783505155 264% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.85567010309 285% => Less nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1258.0 937.175257732 134% => OK
No of words: 252.0 206.0 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99206349206 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76077563126 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543650793651 0.622605031667 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 392.4 290.88556701 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.7205179594 44.8134815571 182% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.833333333 76.5299724578 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 16.8248392259 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 4.34317383033 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 2.54639175258 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 1.49484536082 535% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279243911716 0.216113520407 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0936859275708 0.0766984524023 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0768035293256 0.0603063233224 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170880268397 0.12726935374 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0647893934886 0.0580467560999 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 8.37731958763 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 70.7449484536 71% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 8.71597938144 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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