It is often said that retirement is the happiest time of a person’s life. How far do you agree with this view?
Retirement brings mirth in older people's life, although very few able to visualize the positive aspects of it. It seems to me that retirement is the most contended period of life, and I will explain why in this essay.
Firstly, Retired people embark on journey to pursue their personal interests. This may include, active participation in community voluntary work, spend time with relatives, manage a blood donation campaigns, publish a book and indulge in "Go-Green" Environment friendly project. For Instance, about 6% to 8% of old people took active participation in the Teach for India cause to educate poor children, reported by education department. Secondly, Multinational companies lookout for retired people with people skills and consulting experience to fill in the top management slot on a part time or on a yearly contract basis. Older people receive plethora of opportunities in lieu of position, while all expense paid trip to visit places locally and internationally. Sometime companies ask retired people to become a spokesperson on behalf of the company in International Events and Exhibitions.
However, it is true that there some negative aspects to retirement, most notably the health, which deteriorate as the person becomes old and lack of finance in many case. Despite this, it seems that for many older people these issues are outweighed by pleasures which brings happiness and joy.
To conclude, the personal interests and freedom to live the life in the way one desire to live brings a new lease of life accompanies with no stress and depression.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 472, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'companies'' or 'company's'?
Suggestion: companies'; company's
...ion department. Secondly, Multinational companies lookout for retired people with people ...
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Line 3, column 594, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...to fill in the top management slot on a part time or on a yearly contract basis. Older pe...
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Line 5, column 161, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun case seems to be countable; consider using: 'many cases'.
Suggestion: many cases
...rson becomes old and lack of finance in many case. Despite this, it seems that for many o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1340.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29644268775 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07566776898 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.640316205534 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1632538674 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.818181818 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.45454545455 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17962731479 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0661990965131 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0467739144218 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104625920313 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0355492761711 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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