The graphs below show the types of music albums purchased by people in Britain according to sex and age.

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...s compare an overview of the expenditure for three types of music albums in Brit...
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...nditure for three types of music albums in Britain, taking into account gender a...
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...g into account gender and age of people.Overall,it is obvious from the charts that perc...
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...account gender and age of people.Overall,it is obvious from the charts that percent...
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...music album sales. As the charts depict,men and women spend their cash more on Pop...
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...c album sales. As the charts depict,men and women spend their cash more on Pop M...
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... more on Pop Music and Rock Music albums of the order of 26-25 percent and 15-17...
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...ic albums of the order of 26-25 percent and 15-17 percent ,respectively ,than o...
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...rder of 26-25 percent and 15-17 percent ,respectively ,than on classical music a...
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...percent and 15-17 percent ,respectively ,than on classical music albums which ar...
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...ercent and 15-17 percent ,respectively ,than on classical music albums which are...
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...n 10 percent both for males and females.According to age 25-34 years old people prefer R...
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...h for males and females.According to age 25-34 years old people prefer Rock and p...
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...slightly more than 16-24 years old ones.Whereas,this index shows a huge difference for ...
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...y more than 16-24 years old ones.Whereas,this index shows a huge difference for class...
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...ge difference for classical music albums,only 1 percent for 16-24 years old and more ...
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...gh for 25-24 years old about 16 percent.In addition there are substantial contradi...
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...for 25-24 years old about 16 percent.In addition there are substantial contradistinction...
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...rcent.In addition there are substantial contradistinction between 35-44 and over 45 years old peo...
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...music albums were sold on a large scale.On the contrary percentage of people 35-44...
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...buy rock and pop albums about 30 percent,and over 40 this sum does not reach even 10...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, whereas, while, in addition, in contrast, on the contrary

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1066.0 965.302439024 110% => OK
No of words: 213.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00469483568 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90778277863 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539906103286 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 309.6 283.868780488 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 2.0 8.94146341463 22% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 106.0 22.4926829268 471% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 313.0 43.030603864 727% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 533.0 112.824112599 472% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 106.5 22.9334400587 464% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 35.5 5.23603664747 678% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 21.0 1.69756097561 1237% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252145959042 0.215688989381 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.226019894053 0.103423049105 219% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0365339191014 0.0843802449381 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.226019894053 0.15604864568 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0365339191014 0.0819641961636 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 55.4 13.2329268293 419% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -27.65 61.2550243902 -45% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.51609756098 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 43.5 10.3012195122 422% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.9 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.93 8.06136585366 148% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 11.4329268293 249% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 44.4 10.9970731707 404% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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