Modern communications mean that it’s no longer necessary to write letters.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Technology has improved by the pass of the years and there are people who think there is no need to communicate through letters anymore. However, I would argue about this thought because I strongly believe modern communications have actually helped us to contact others easily and to write letters without needing a physical piece of paper.
Nowadays, communications have been easier because the variety of electronic gadgets and appliances which allow people to be in contact with others in no matter of time. Thanks to internet access communications are easier and faster than they were years ago. For instance, family members or friends can contact at any time even if they do not live on the same country, because of the modern communications offers that enable people to write messages or letters through applications like Word, Gmail, Hotmail, and others which also help the writer to have a correct writing, free of errors thank to the benefits of technology.
In addition, the lastest communications advances can do that people write letters while there is not a physical piece of paper available. No needing a sheet to write to someone, without having to use pencil or pen is another advantage of modernity, which allow us to contact with others. In international business or study issues, for example, it is really useful to write a letter through electronic devices that help enquires or important information to be sent overseas and still communicate in a formal manner.
To conclude, although there are modern ways to communicate with others around the world, there is known that letters are still important to write because they enable us to get the information we need, and technology has had a great development that can be used to help us write.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in a formal manner" with adverb for "formal"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, however, if, really, so, still, while, for example, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1481.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05460750853 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7870901484 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529010238908 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.4792742279 49.4020404114 163% => OK
Chars per sentence: 164.555555556 106.682146367 154% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.5555555556 20.7667163134 157% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3333333333 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164829946675 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0793276442427 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0230726098692 0.0667982634062 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11431869689 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00912477563342 0.056905535591 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.6 13.0946893788 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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