You are unhappy about a plan to make your local airport bigger and increase the number of flights. You live near the airport.Write a letter to your local newspaper. In your letter.1. explain where you live2. describe the problem3. give reasons why you do

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You are unhappy about a plan to make your local airport bigger and increase the number of flights. You live near the airport.

Write a letter to your local newspaper. In your letter.

1. explain where you live
2. describe the problem
3. give reasons why you do not want this development

Dear Sir/Madam,

This is with regard to the recent plan to make our local airport bigger and increase the number of flights.

I reside around 2 Km away from the local airport with my parents, my sister's family and my grandmother. Our house is situated on the main road on which most of the travelers used to travel to the airport. Our family is living here for more than 30 years.

This airport restructuring plan has become a concern to our family. This is because, the construction will involve heavy vehicles travelling on the main road and the environment will be noisy all the time. This noisy and busy surrounding will be uncomfortable to my grandmother who is a heart patient and my sister's 8 months old son might get sick due to the polluted air resulting from the huge building work at the airport.

Apart from the above, we are informed by the municipal council to use alternative roads on some days due to heavy vehicles transport on the main road. This is going to be very inconvenient for us.

Therefore, please be good enough to consider the situation and take appropriate actions in order to avoid or minimize the impact.

Yours faithfully,

Vaishnavi

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 207, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...environment will be noisy all the time. This noisy and busy surrounding will be unco...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, therefore, apart from, with regard to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 983.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 205.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79512195122 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68881836499 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619512195122 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 296.1 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.9974270387 44.8134815571 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.3636363636 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6363636364 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.72727272727 4.34317383033 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113117557733 0.216113520407 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0508088449121 0.0766984524023 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0623045724028 0.0603063233224 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0693937095233 0.12726935374 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0872475261136 0.0580467560999 150% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 75.8426966292 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.75 Out of 9
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